Nicholas_0951

You know what they call cheese in Paris?

The plot is too slow, the character is a paper tiger that is not smart enough to be a villain (He almost got killed in a cave and was saved by plot armour), the grammar is wrong almost every paragraph and I finally dropped at 131 due to the most egregious misspelling below:plagued by assignation attempts and sabayon frassignation should be assassination, but sabayon fr is indecipherable and should've been caught before posting, showing the author's lack of care for his webnovel

I think this story is extremely bland, the FMC just falls in love in 5 chapters or so, and I hate the fact that "rappist" murderers just get a slap on the wrist and become MC's friend(like qi wuhui's son)

funny if she pulls a nawaki

then he should just write an original story or even just an AU then. no point making it the same then changing one or two important plot points from the original story. a good fanfic would show the butterfly effect of the mc existing, not just change Dan's personality to fit their narrative

realistic Skyrim cities but for genshin

chaste as in 'haven't been with another for many years' i think

i don't think Hu Tao would say that D:

It's getting annoying when he keeps saying "I'm a student" instead of just admitting "I'm a capital owner" like the capitalist he is

Lemme get this straight, he suddenly became brothers with the dude who attempted to rp his sister in ch43?