David_Jordan_2345

Excellent atmosphere!

So our hero is a short king. lol

What a wise teacher. Definitely knowledgeable on people, and capable of learning from witnessing others. Very well written!

So a self help guru like fellow, turned genocidal criminal worse than the funny mustache man learns how, and follows through with getting to another world. There he uses his knowledge of human behavior to become??? I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes. Excellent story so far my friend!

Excellent atmosphere and writing!

Probably the funniest thing I've seen all day.

Great chapter. Excellent depiction of the city, and its boundaries. The city acting like a trap is cool. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Hey man, great chapter. I'm enjoying it as always. It's interesting to me that the Heavens give his slaves power, but to the Heavens, I'm sure it would be less than an ant. Anyway great chapter as always!

I'm loving the way you show us the history of characters. excellent chapter. thank you very much!

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza