You have a way with words; the way the story flows, a way with placing each character and developing their behaviour perfectly in relation with the other characters. I love it. Keep it up.

*needs a Carol

Carol is so caring. I bet everyone would want a Carol in their lives.

The portrayal of Carey as a gentleman is so charming.

Wow, I'm loving how Karen's character is developing.

Splendid storytelling. Can't wait to read how Karen's situation unfolds