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hideyoshi...!? who...!???

wait I thought this novel was about sharingan. where did the system come from...!?

had a great start but then the author lost it. mc started flaunting his future knowledge to everyone, without anyone any real consequences that breaks immersion.

you are moving too fast. foreign policy and kashmir shouldn't be his concern before the independence.

you lost your rhythm in the last two chapters. putting historically inaccurate information and confusing the shit out of it.

is it AI written....?

best novel about cricket. no parasitic system, no emotional drama. mc actually grinds like an athlete, mc is smart, also mc understands technical details of the game. great novel so far

how is that brainwashing...!??? literally every country does that.

thank you, I just disliked your comment, even though no one will be able to see it.

why isn't there a dislike button on such comments.