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Is this a request for a fix or?
Hopefully! In this fic I plan to do Hiruzen some justice along with other characters who will be mentions like Tobirama or characters that do appear like the 3rd Raikage, Jiraya, etc. Anyhow, we will simply have to wait and see what happens while also hoping Danzo gets what he deserves!^^
Your comments have been answered, I edited/fixed up the things you have brought up! Much thanks and please give me more feedback in the future!^^
Great idea, I’ll try and fix what you’ve brought up! Much thanks!👍
Will do!👍
Edits have been made, much thanks for your feedback! A bit late on my part on notifying you but ah, a black cat crossed my path so I had to go the long way around!^^”
Also, thank you for your feedback! I will try to explain both points brought up in the next chapter!👍
The point of the wooden wall is to occupy the Suna Shinobi, leading to more losses on their side. As for the whole Earth Jutsu stone bit, Fusa/James does say the second wall will be made of stone and brick, and will be the main defense. So ah yeah.^^” No clue if the other message I sent actually well sent so here’s the more simpler answer!^^
The Fox Summons aren’t Messagers, they’re for purely hunting, combat, and patrols. That and the later chapters wouldn’t have made sense, the side character of Yutane would also fail to get his upcoming character development as well. So uh yeah, consider this as the fic’s first plot hole I guess, lol!^^”
Thanks, I’ll go ahead and do some editing later tonight!👍
Is this a request for a correction or something else? If It’s a correction, you’ll have to tell me where it is as I can’t see for which paragraph your comment is for.^^”
True that, lol!
That will be explained in a future chapter.
Fixed, much thanks!^^