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to connect with the story you can also do as there was some sort of problem with her martial spirits but mc help her to balance her bloodline, therefore it can also connect with original dd2 where she was enabled to do so resulting in bad mutation of martial spirit or early death
if it has to be from dd2 then out of all the options snow empress would be best but if you can somehow add dd3's long yuyue then it would be great ,make it as her ancestor or something same age as the mc with same martial spirits as in dd3.
up until now the story has been almost perfect everything from writing quality to story pacing is one of the best so far. only thing of concern is that mc is a common weeb who might have to rely entirely on his system for everything. which can become boring but let's see what happens.Great work don't drop, it looks promising
96 or even 97** not 98 Sorry
First, Tang hao's soul power rise to level 92 after absorbing ah yin soul ring it's remenent effect along with subconscious cultivation that lead to his soul power to level 95 after 6 years,if he were to absorb her soul born as well then it might have become level 96 or even 98 at the start of the season (aka after 6 years).Second: it's from level 95 that's why real powerhouse in douluo are super douluo (level 95-98) it will change many things if you change it to level 91....
Bro, I agree with you it's fine until you think about her age, and don't give me that there real age is not exactly that I know that but still she has to be at least 80000-90000 year and for your kind information rabbit breeds like crazy so I don't understand how that's heroine material..
Pretty sure his soul power level was half.So I don't think it's his martial soul problem but it's due to his half innate soul power that let luo sanpao to mutate as he is instead of holy dragon..