Kingoftheworld00

It was very good chapter much more better than the previous ones . But

The first chapter confused me a lot if I had was only first chapter then I would have given very bad rating but since I decided to read the second chapter everything improved . So for new watcher I just want to say that don't stop after reading the first chapter .

You have improved a lot . In first chapter it wasn't clear who was the one talking & it was really confusing & not clear but the second chapter was fascinating.