This has potential and a different take from the normal "reincarnation" stories. the pacing felt a bit fast but that's OK since there are only 2 ch while writing this review

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the pacing still bothers me but It looks like the events will get better i always love the part were the mc grindes

Is this the first draft of the authors first chapter ? he has another story with the same name but the first chapter is longer and a little bit different

I only left this review as support for the story as it seems promising. the pacing is messy in the first chapter as this is apparently the authors first attempt, i will update this review as the story updates

Not bad for a first chapter . the three figures were just cannon fodder which was disappointing ,i expected them to be more relevant .and also the pacing is kinda off ,but i enjoyed this chapter and i hope to see more .