Half_Dark_8652

Keep it coming.

I'm sensing WH4OK vibes.. .. .

Here is an idea......POST MORE OFTEN!!!!!!

Warhammer 40k is a grimdark universe where very little happy stories, it's okay on comedy but somewhat predictable.

I see that my constructive criticism was taken into consideration. Good chapter, keep it good.

These pasta chapters feels too...easy. Don't get me wrong they're good and I love em, but they are missing a little....conflicte. This is an A rated read for sure, but it is also just A rated. Warhammer is a grimdark universe where very little positive stories(like a needle in a haystack warehouse). These not enough....suffering, not enough....grimdark, and honestly a little predictable. A very good read, but none the less, just a very good read.

Finally! !!

Was wondering when this comes

Correction:Arabic, not Afghani.

I'm Arab and this So CRING! !! !! !!