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He makes a move to grab me and take me from Abe's arms and my eyes widen in my alarm. - hidingpanduh11mthCommentedIt took me a couple of minutes of convincing and gaslighting to make her believe that I will be totally fine. Although unwilling, she did eventually give up.
- hidingpanduh11mthCommented"Leon? Noah stop playing your games. I don't care who you are trying to fool, I am not interested in any of your nonsense. I just wanted to let you know that father wants to talk to you." She said, slightly flustered. Getting up from the floor, the girl stormed out of the room.
- hidingpanduh11mthCommentedThis is it. This is true art.
- hidingpanduh11mthCommented"Why...you..." His voice was barely audible as he struggled to breathe. Anguish was written over his face.
- hidingpanduh11mthCommentedPulling out a dagger from his belt, Leon plunged it deep into Seth's back. Blood gushed from the wound as the world watched in horror.
- hidingpanduh11mthCommentedIt was through their efforts that the world could breathe again. It is peaceful now and thus, their journey will end here. The heroes were no longer needed anymore. There was nowhere left for them to go.
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How sharp are his nails dang
This paragraph has been deleted. - hidingpanduh11mthCommentedBlack smoke is twirling around his body. Pouring off of him, just like it was in his 'dream'. Just like Arabella.
- hidingpanduh11mthCommentedArabella suddenly grabs his face in a strong grip. His eyes open wide by her sudden action. "What are-" he starts, but is cut off by her lips touching his in a sensual and passionate kiss.
- hidingpanduh11mthCommentedHe spins around quickly and sees the most beautiful woman he has ever seen. She is wrapped in black smoke and mist which seems to flow off of her. With raven black hair and black eyes like the void. Her face is perfectly proportioned and pale, not unhealthily pale, but a more delicate and mesmerizing color. Her hair reaches her down to her knees and was rich and full. She was slim and toned, almost like a dancer. She is wearing an all-black gown and cloak, adding to the mystique. And on her forehead were two black horns, almost hidden in her hair.
- hidingpanduh11mthCommentedThe blood on the floor darkened. He didn't notice.
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VIncent, absolute KINGGGG! I am enjoying this story a lot! For me itâs a good balance between character interaction and world-building/descriptions. I feel very attached as if I am the main character experiencing the reincarnation/transfer of the soul. I feel like the writing is easy to digest and the pacing is appropriate, especially the way new information gets revealed from one chapter to the next. I donât have many complaints except that for me the two MCs are Vincent and system lol. Maybe there can be focus on more than one character development other than Vincent? Like a companion or something? I think Alex is a good option for further character development and I also wonder whether there will be more first person perspectives explored like the shop keeper. Itâs cool that youâre able to write in all those perspectives! I also look forward to seeing all the effects of his advancement in skills etc. Like how that will look like when he puts them to use and when thereâs more action and adventure scenes. This is probably one of my favorite isekai novels so far that Iâve read here. Keep it up, dear author!
- hidingpanduh11mthCommentedAlright, how did this turn into a psychology lesson?
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Wow lol
[Congratulations to the Host for surviving through the pain with just willpower alone. I highly commend your foolishness.] - hidingpanduh11mthCommented
Awww
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