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RosemilOduor

RosemilOduor

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An author and a lover of books.

2022-02-02 JoinedGlobal
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  • RosemilOduor
    RosemilOduor1yr
    Posted

    It's a little bit too early to write this I've only read 8 chapters but here I am still. I love how the story is coming up and I'm looking forward to reading more chapters to see how it all unfolds. It's going to be a rollercoaster but we'll ride on. Guys, give the book a shot. Cheers author

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    My Dark Isekai Project
    Fantasy · Israr_Hossain_Ifty
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  • RosemilOduor
    RosemilOduor1yr
    Posted

    This. Is. Good. I love it. I'm so happy to come across the book. The descriptions and flow of the story are so good that you get so hooked right from the beginning. Guys should definitely give this book a chance. To the author, keep up the good work. Best wishes.

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    Diaries of a Hybrid and Her Mate
    Fantasy · Sherryann Martinez
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  • RosemilOduor
    RosemilOduor1yr
    Commented

    *if we make it in time

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    Diaries of a Hybrid and Her Mate
    Fantasy · Sherryann Martinez
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  • RosemilOduor
    RosemilOduor1yr
    Commented

    I love your descriptions

    Ch 1 Prologue
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    Diaries of a Hybrid and Her Mate
    Fantasy · Sherryann Martinez
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  • RosemilOduor
    RosemilOduor1yr
    Commented

    I've just started this...

    Ch 1 Monsters city
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    My Dark Isekai Project
    Fantasy · Israr_Hossain_Ifty
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  • RosemilOduor
    RosemilOduor1yr
    Posted

    I love the story's world background and the storyline. The author should however try to work on the sentence structure and writing quality in general. Otherwise, you guys should give the book a try.

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    War is the way into the unknown
    Eastern · Gamal_3_3_
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  • RosemilOduor
    RosemilOduor1yr
    Posted

    Hello guys. I'm the author, kindly give this piece a try. Feel free to also give constructive criticism and feedback to help me better my writing. I hope you enjoy the read. Cheers.

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    Loving Mr. Trouble
    Urban · RosemilOduor
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  • RosemilOduor
    RosemilOduor1yr
    Commented

    I love the storyline but you can improve on the Grammer and avoid some repetition at the beginning of the chapter

    Ch 1 0001 Chapter One : The Beginning
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    War is the way into the unknown
    Eastern · Gamal_3_3_
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  • RosemilOduor
    RosemilOduor1yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

    Ch 52 The Devil Reiterates
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    Her Dumb Honour
    Urban · RosemilOduor
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  • RosemilOduor
    RosemilOduor1yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

    Ch 51 Entanglements
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    Her Dumb Honour
    Urban · RosemilOduor
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  • RosemilOduor
    RosemilOduor1yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

    Ch 45 The Unexpected Revelation
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    Her Dumb Honour
    Urban · RosemilOduor
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  • RosemilOduor
    RosemilOduor1yr
    Commented

    Maybe the last sentence could be joined with the second last:

    Looking around, it seemed like I was in a very luxurious hotel room, and I was alone. I was sitting on a king size bed in a large room decorated with burgundy wallpaper. The room was luxuriously decorated with a mix of burgundy and gold color tones.
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    Love Slave to My Devil CEO Boss R18
    Urban · Realfantasies
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  • RosemilOduor
    RosemilOduor1yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

    Ch 44 The Birth of Vengeance
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    Her Dumb Honour
    Urban · RosemilOduor
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  • RosemilOduor
    RosemilOduor1yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

    Ch 44 The Birth of Vengeance
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    Her Dumb Honour
    Urban · RosemilOduor
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  • RosemilOduor
    RosemilOduor1yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

    Ch 44 The Birth of Vengeance
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    Her Dumb Honour
    Urban · RosemilOduor
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  • RosemilOduor
    RosemilOduor1yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

    Ch 43 The Charade Falls Off
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    Her Dumb Honour
    Urban · RosemilOduor
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  • RosemilOduor
    RosemilOduor1yr
    Posted

    It's a little bit too early to write this since only 8 chapters have been uploaded but here I am still. I love how the story is coming up and I'm looking forward to reading more of Jayden and Celine's story. It's going to be a rollercoaster but we'll ride on.

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    Living as Celebrity and Falling In Love
    Urban · Boyfriend
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  • RosemilOduor
    RosemilOduor1yr
    Commented

    Jayden is so unpredictable. For one minutes, he is being sweet and wants to help Celine but the next, he talks to her like a piece of trash

    Ch 4 Rookie Artist Ask For Help
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    Living as Celebrity and Falling In Love
    Urban · Boyfriend
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  • RosemilOduor
    RosemilOduor1yr
    Commented

    being mean

    "Do you know? I turned down five offers of drama for the sake of this drama. At first, I felt challenged to find out how good the acting of this year's Best Rookie Artist winner was. But my expectations were too high. Your acting is poor. I wondered, were you like this when filming your drama debut a few months ago?" Jayden asked disparagingly.
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    Living as Celebrity and Falling In Love
    Urban · Boyfriend
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  • RosemilOduor
    RosemilOduor1yr
    Commented

    looks like love has started to bloom[img=faceslap]

    Celine pushed Lucia away. "Do you think I'm lying? And now, Jayden is rested for the next few days until the bruises on his face disappear. What am I supposed to do? And I don't think apologizing to him is enough. Lucia, what if he harbored a grudge against me for this incident? What if he stays away from me and doesn't give me a chance to build chemistry with him?"
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    Living as Celebrity and Falling In Love
    Urban · Boyfriend
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