See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

To start with i really love the idea behind the story, and the interactions between the the characters also feel naturel with the differing personalities, speaking slightly different. I also want to say the pacing is good but, since there is only 15 ch atm it's not easy for me to tell. And even the quality of the writing is good, as i haven't seen any spelling mistakes that took away my immersion. So to sum it up, great story and continue doing what you are and i believe it will be a fantastic read