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officially dropped for all the intelligence of mc you just decided to nerf the mc here if you authors can't handle a smart mc then don't make him too smart from the start but you do and then you just decide to nerf him seriously I'm thinking what we're the authors of ff eating before writing this type shitt
author isn't clear on his agenda of the ff like does he wants the mc to follow the cannon or break it and if he wants the mc to follow the Canon then do so why are you dragging the whole chapters when in one chapter the author says he will deal with the dark lord but has no strength no strategy or anything just behaving like a mc so whoever comes across this ff I would say don't read it I tried to continue this ff but it's too idiotic and unimpressive
yeah as long as mc deals with Tom riddle everything is fine like he'll it is the mc neither is practicing spells nor is he doing anything to develop his magic infact he is just focused on classes and his fucking newspaper and he dreams of dealing with the dark lord seriously I personally think the author was smoking some low level weed when he wrote this fucking price of shit ff
fuck you author what's the point of writing a ff if your mc is a forgetful retard who forgot the Canon and can't even decide if he wants to interfere or not like seriously
fuck this ff and fuck you author your mc can't even beat a noseless bastard what good is he even if he is a dueling champ
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fuck you author why are you so hell bent on ruining this ff from the start
is it just me or the mc seems to be turned into a battle junky
fuck you author and fuck your stupidity it had the potential to be a good ff but you ruined it the moment you decided to fuck this up with this Rachel Roth and dc bullshit I recommend you try to read other hp ff first before writing idiocies like this ff here
seriously why I'm reading this shit fuck of a ff this is a poor attempt of making a hp ff and the reason or should I say excise the author have is to make the story progressive seriously you could've used any other plot like multiversal traversal but no you have to include these non sensual fight scenes in this ff like is there any logic of a level 5 mc to fight with a God level character a being who even the JL didn't beat