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VISHAL_SINGH_4070

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  • VISHAL_SINGH_4070
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    I have read until chapter 500 and there is no change in mc behaviour he is still childish and immature does thing on a whim without any proper planning like the demon invasion part around 400 where he is interrogating the demon general without any fear of surroundings and instead of completing the claim the reward mission of dimensional crevice he is wasting time on that demon and gives time for the general to inform the demon king

    New Age Of Summoners
    Fantasy · vinayraj
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  • VISHAL_SINGH_4070
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    mc is stupid, the chapters are short and mc uses jeez way often then he uses his brain I am dropping this novel 5 year old write better stories than you

    Almighty Summoner System
    Action · Neil_Ads
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  • VISHAL_SINGH_4070
    VISHAL_SINGH_40702mth
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    hey I am just asking is there any possibility that you are continuing super gene part 2 in future because you just left the story at a cliffhanger we never get to know what is behind that golden door in which the god gene coin that Han Sen used to beat Qin Xiu , and Han Jinzji used it to access the santuary door . I would like the story to continue and if you really wanted the story to end there then you should have not left it at a cliffhanger..

    Super Gene
    Sci-fi · Twelve-Winged Dark Seraphim
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  • VISHAL_SINGH_4070
    VISHAL_SINGH_40703mth
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    is the mc an idiot when he got a tear of demonic priestess that can revert a demonkin to a human he should have used it on photos but no he is completely ignoring it and uriel also is not saying anything about it its like they both forgot about such an item

    Ch 56 Battlefield of Terror(PART 4)
    AUTO-BATTLE? WHAT A BORING SKILL
    Fantasy · Shuri_Suki
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  • VISHAL_SINGH_4070
    VISHAL_SINGH_40703mth
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    like I said the mc is just a retard , he was well over 20 years old with a degree so he should be able to show some maturity but no he is behaving like an idiotic child of age 10 like his body

    Ch 21 Getting Lost.
    Skill Creation in the Fantasy World
    Fantasy · Seraphinn_
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  • VISHAL_SINGH_4070
    VISHAL_SINGH_40703mth
    Commented

    Well I think it is your first tym writing a novel that's why you are portraying the mc as an idiot while he is well over 20 years old

    Ch 14 The Receptionist.
    Skill Creation in the Fantasy World
    Fantasy · Seraphinn_
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  • VISHAL_SINGH_4070
    VISHAL_SINGH_40704mth
    Commented

    but what is this with all writers making the maid of mc fall head over heels in love with mc like seriously grow up bro you are making it cringe and it's like Grayfia is a taperecorder she kept speaking I will protect you we will face it together repeatedly

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  • VISHAL_SINGH_4070
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    this is the shiniest Novel I have read till date

    Ch 14 A Conversationion
    Soul Fusion System Awakening
    Fantasy · Diyen_Pi
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  • VISHAL_SINGH_4070
    VISHAL_SINGH_40704mth
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    I was enjoying reading till here but writer you just ruined the whole story till here you portrayed the mc as someone capable of mind games and intelligent but now you are portraying him as a fool who is led away by lucifer like a dog through his nose I am dropping this novel like seriously if mc wanted to leave earth then he should have asked khione who is a dragon and much more trustworthy instead of listening to the devil

    Ch 44 Coming to light
    My Girlfriend is an Ice Dragon
    Fantasy · Zefyr
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  • VISHAL_SINGH_4070
    VISHAL_SINGH_40704mth
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    Well I kind of think that the mc is stupid, his iq level is very low like a cow he hust goes with the crowd not understanding the situations like seriously his grandmother told him to enroll in Saint Claire academy that is in another city then why did he went to byrhendlr

    Ch 7 I Think I Rode The Wrong Train
    Strongest Warlock - Wizard World Irregular
    Fantasy · Elyon
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  • VISHAL_SINGH_4070
    VISHAL_SINGH_40704mth
    Replied to Solastius_Seena

    Well whatever i just dropped it

    Ch 45 The Daughter That Lost It All
    Apocalyptic World: I've Got The Second System
    Games · Solastius_Seena
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  • VISHAL_SINGH_4070
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    Commented

    seriously bro you need to work on your plot your mc is a half assed teenager that is a coward and does everything whether inhumane or bad without worrying about consequences at least he should have used this chance to do good instead of unnecessary player killing for level up I think instead of Randy , the mc should be dead

    Ch 45 The Daughter That Lost It All
    Apocalyptic World: I've Got The Second System
    Games · Solastius_Seena
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  • VISHAL_SINGH_4070
    VISHAL_SINGH_40704mth
    Commented

    bloody cringe chapter mc is not behaving like a mc and storyline is lackluster

    Ch 32 Heaven Devourer mountain
    Malevolent Warlock: Sin Of Eternity
    Fantasy · primodial
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  • VISHAL_SINGH_4070
    VISHAL_SINGH_40704mth
    Commented

    your novel sucks bad story writing

    Ch 6 Survival 101
    Chaos Energy System
    Fantasy · The_Forgotten_
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  • VISHAL_SINGH_4070
    VISHAL_SINGH_40704mth
    Commented

    your writing doesn't make sense at all first learn how to write a proper sentence then star a novel

    Ch 3 C3 Smelly Scolding
    Ten times rebate system
    Fantasy · LordKrrish_YT
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  • VISHAL_SINGH_4070
    VISHAL_SINGH_40704mth
    Commented

    Well the chapter is good but clear my confusion why the heck a noble vampire just turn a sick human in to a vampire

    Ch 3 Chapter 03: Violet Snow.  
    My Three Wives Are Beautiful Vampires.
    Fantasy · Victor_Weismann
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  • VISHAL_SINGH_4070
    VISHAL_SINGH_40705mth
    Commented

    I think the mc is stupid and has no brains and he is a coward who fears his own little sister I mean at least he is older so he should've adapted to that world by now but he is still behaving like a toddler

    Ch 10 Arrow Rush
    Magic Shop System
    Fantasy · Eternal_Demon
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  • VISHAL_SINGH_4070
    VISHAL_SINGH_40705mth
    Commented

    is the mc pretending to be dumb or is he just plain stupid?

    Ch 5 Divine Lion Magic Shop
    Magic Shop System
    Fantasy · Eternal_Demon
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  • VISHAL_SINGH_4070
    VISHAL_SINGH_40705mth
    Commented

    well look at that our mc got a op system which rewarded the mc with sss pet nd sword but he is still a coward

    Ch 6 One Month Later: The Arrival Of The Green Poison Disaster
    Doomsday: I Obtained A Fallen Angel Pet At The Start Of The Game
    Fantasy · Daniannnn
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  • VISHAL_SINGH_4070
    VISHAL_SINGH_40706mth
    Commented

    please improve the character of mc he is behaving like a 4 year child every time system tell to do something the mc is ignoring its instructions to become strong like a rich snobbish brat

    Ch 14 Into the city
    Lucifer system: Becoming the Devil in an Apocalypse
    Fantasy · SoulSnatcher
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