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This novel starts out at 100, throwing you right into the action. The plot starts quickly and doesn't slow down. Jack ,The main character, adjusts quickly to his new world and begins his job in earnest. This is an excellent start to a unique type of story.

Honestly, a really good start to the novel. The author has created a lived in world that displays excellent world building. The author is also excellent at writing descriptions as I can picture the scenes happening in my mind. This will be a wonderful novel.

It should be "who believes in shamanism and stuff?" That's what I was talking about :)

This is an interesting book that grabs your attention and keeps it there. It has a lot of mystery that makes you want to keep reading to get to the bottom of.

Kept me reading to see what was going to happen and when the grandma was going to show up, bravo!

This chapter has some relatable moments, it feels like real reactions people would have

Though it has a few errors, this chapter gives an excellent view into the differences between the two sisters.

Thank you for the feedback. I will go back and touch up on a few of the sections you highlighted. Much appreciated!

I added a few paragraph comments. If I come across anything more, I'll comment :)

Maybe it's just the bond between the two of them, but he seems to accept what the old man is saying awfully quickly and very quickly begins questioning the priests.