why oh why do u have to explain things over n over, get on with the story

Dear Writer This can go places. Great start so far. I am a big reader. It's probably what I do most really and if I can get a job reading I probably would lol. I like the flow of the story and where it can go. This one has potential and I hope u keep going and endure through all the time and struggles. I ll be reading every step of the way. If I can read this and be able to see it like a movie in my head it's pretty damn good.

still so much over explaining and going over things over and over, focus more on the story to, yes details are important but not when they are explained continually n takes whole chapters just for that. I want the story, what comes next. try to tone it down and mix the details in with the pace of the story. try not to repeat to much. this could ve of easily been near the top of my favorites. I read alot..... alot lol. sometimes several books at once n some. stop the repetition so much n this would be epic mYbe more epic then others I have read. Bout to give up on reading this cause of the waste of chapters, my time n money.

again going over the same details that were already explained previously, a whole chapter wasted. my money going down the drain for this book

A lil to much details explained over and over, sometimes wanna be like just continue the story, whole chapters explaining the same thing over n over is not that great. Otherwise love the story

this is kinda sad, like a slap to face for the reader ands fans of this novel, so much potential. Really a good read but destroyed by the ending. To sad

Hate ones like this, if u are not gonna complete why even start. Incompetent to the extreme. I almost hate who did this really.

ditto

I was really happy with this story for the first 100 or so chapters but then it just changed drastically, the story, the background, the focal points, what happened to the caskte lords n mikes castle, what happened to all the dragons, y did a story end n a whole bew one began. I am so disappointed with this book. first book on here that i wish i never started reading. if i knew it would go like this its not worth money i spent to read it. wish I could get a refund but I know no such thing will ever happen. whoever messed up a perfectly good story to turn it into something different u should be ashamed of urself to the fullest.

I need more of this story, don't stop yo. wish I had more of a option to put more money towards this but sucks to be broke

I need more lol, great story really