okay, there are too many nicknames. It is super confusing! also, I think these should have been two separate books. the storylines don't really seem to mesh. it is almost like the Joey POV was written by someone else because the writing quality on those chapters is poor compared to the Taryn POV chapters. You could really benefit from having an editor look over your work before you submit. I like the story, but it's frustrating to read when there are so many incomplete sentences or misspellings that it makes it hard to understand what is going on

Ash may already be abusing that power...jealous much!?

I need more 😩

what!? I had suspicions they might be mates but I wasn't expecting this!

can we please get more chapters? it's been 4 days!!! 😭

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