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I think you ment reborn 9 days before... you forgot writing days
this paragraph is also repeated
ehh you already wrote it in the previous paragraph
who doesn't enjoy a cold helpless shower. I would welcome it every morning.
really impressesive is that not be ause he only saw 2 before from his mother and from this women from his previous life
Happy Birthday to you Happy Birthday to you Happy Birthday dear Eros happy Birthday to you. Sto lat sto lat niech żyje żyje nam jeszcze raz jeszcze raz niech żyje żyje nam Niech żyje nam Zim Geburtstag viel Glück zum Geburtstag viel Glück zum Geburtstag lieber Eros zum Geburtstag viel Glück In all languages I know the lyrics for songs which wish a happy Birthday
If you(author) want to make a romance subplot can the lover of the MC not be Lisa. This would be to predictable, and boring maybe in the future you can introduce another originally side character and her can be the lover, or you introduce a girl which hadn't shown up in the original story, or he meets a girl which showed up, and is as talented as Hiro or even as the MC(meaning she has a 9 star art) but our MC got transported in the novel before this character could develop
as far as I understood this chapter is that the babysitter betrayed Christian which lead to an attack, Christian figured it before out and spoke in a code with the 911 operator. Then Christian killed all the assaulters and then the police officers shot him
i think you forgot to translate the Tia to aunty
sorry for the typo
i think o stead of brothers you should write so lings because he has both a sister and brother
I think you mean bRought if this r is missing you write the past tense of buy and I don't think you mean that