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JOESMO9mthCommentedCh 7 A Dinner of Joy- JOESMO11mthCommented
I hope he kills him
" I know Fia- Chan, but he won't because we are gonna save her, and he will Somewhat In debt to us if he leaves Three Faction we will suffer a Great Loss, and who can Say he can Also become a Devil can't be!? Knowing his Lover is Devil I can offer him to be an Ultimate Class devil he can have his Harem, his love, and maybe he can free Ria from her Marriage what do you think?" He explained his Smart ass logic. - JOESMO11mthPosted
Writing Quality -- 5 stars The writing is actually good. There are barely any mistakes and the ones that the author does make they won't stop you getting immersed in the story. Updates -- 5 stars The author updates everyday and the one time he missed a update he was hanging out with his friends which is reasonable and the next day he updated the fanfic twice in one day. Story development -- Idk yet When writing this there are only 13 chapters so it is too early to tell but the story is also good and will keep you interested because of the different elements you normally wouldn't get because this takes place in spider verse and don't worry there is no forced thing going on in the story (as of chapter 13). Character -- 4.5 I wanted to give a 4.5 for the character but as I'm writing this on my laptop it won't let me give it a half star so pretend the star is 4.5. Anyway the only thing that might annoy a small amount of readers is mc. Its not like the mc is bad or anything its just that for some of you people that like serious mc might get annoyed because he gets back at his bullies with his powers (Only for one chapter). However, I honestly find the mc fun to read about and find it good because it builds his character. The Mc is also logical and doesn't do anything stupid. World background -- 5 stars I'm not going to say much because I don't want to spoil it but its definitely interesting. And honestly the other idiots giving this a 1 star review are dumb I mean one complained the grammar was bad but he's French and of course when reading through google translate its going to be bad and the other guy says he gets random powers but that is false as he makes some stuff through chemistry and biology and get powers that actually makes sense. The other one talks about there is no story but obviously there isn't going to be much because its been 13 chapters. Anyway I'm done with ranting this fanfic is actually good and I enjoy it and you should give it a try. Oh yeah I forgot to add, this isn't going to be haram.
- JOESMO11mthCommented
You could go to tensura
-Nah, let's go to some new world which haven't explored in Fan-Fiction.} - JOESMO11mthCommentedCh 1 (The rise of Ultron.)
- JOESMO11mthCommentedCh 8 Powers
- JOESMO11mthCommented
does he have eternal?
Haru activated his Sharingan and the Nine-tailed Fox was covered in dark red armor with covered its head with a tengu mask that had a long nose wide shoulder guards, forearm protectors, breastplate, and shin guards as well. The armor looked like that of a samurai with the symbol of the sun on the breastplate. - JOESMO11mthReplied to Vaerus
yes
Well, I have an idea about which world is going to be next still the votes are still valid. so say what you have in mind. I think TBATE would be good right after this as the power level of the two worlds is close even though TBATE is weaker in comparison. we can go for Omni reader after that which will be a hell of a world to enter. so even if I Skip TBATE isn't going to be a big deal. because writing TBATE after the Omni Arc is going to be pointless. - JOESMO1yrCommented
I bet he’s gonna tell raven
Summer then told him "Tai I need your word that you won't tell anyone what I am about to tell. Not Qrow, not Oz. No-one." Tai looked at her hearing the seriousness in her tone and saw only steel in her eyes. - JOESMO1yrCommentedCh 36 CHAPTER 36
- JOESMO1yrCommentedCh 3 Chapter 3
- JOESMO1yrCommented
wait I thought only mikasa’s dad was an ackerman?
"Ezekiel!" Screams out my mother and Mikasa, both of their eyes were full of shock and their pale faces were filled with fear. Shit, I have to get up, I cough out blood. "This payback for breaking my fucking arm! Die!" The other intruder goes to stab me in the chest. Suddenly the unthinkable happened, my mother went in the way and she protected me and Mikasa, her Ackerman bloodline instincts were unleashed, she would do anything to protect Mikasa and now me. NO! - JOESMO1yrCommentedCh 5 Ackerman Blood [Spoiler]
- JOESMO1yrCommentedCh 29 CHAPTER 29
- JOESMO1yrReplied to Santino_Sanal
PLEASE DO
"Don't worry, my recent strength has just broken through, even if I face a shadow-level powerhouse, I can save my life!"