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Jarno_Vdkolk1mthReplied to ovrseerHonestly, Webnovels are generally expensive. The amount you pay for like 30-60 chapters is enough to buy a paperback book on Amazon. Not to mention the kindle Digital editions.
detailRiches and Bitches: I have a gate to an isekai and leveling-up system!Fantasy ¡ MotivatedSloth- Jarno_Vdkolk1mthReplied to Frozentech
Honestly I think the author changed. The change and mentions in regards of the whole " morality " stuff also can't be compared to earlier chapters. I think the old author/writer didn't meet deadlines or something and that there's a new one on herald of steel now. Either way, The story is currently just being milked. I'm no longer supporting the work or paying coins to read it on webnovel.
- Jarno_Vdkolk1mthPosted
Really great the first couple hundred chapters but it eventually turns from bad to worse. I'm not sure if the writer/author has been changed or if he has no more motivation in his book but it's starting to get milked. long unnecessary descriptions, Stuff that gets pulled into multiple chapters and as of late more POV changes going up to 6 chapters long about unimportant background characters. The way he writes about morality and stuff also greatly changes which makes me believe the author/writer changed. All in all its massive drop in quality. I've stopped supporting his work, I'm no longer paying coins to read.
- Jarno_Vdkolk2mthCommented
ZanZan soldiers with superior equipment and proper military roman training are being butchered by old man as it they were chickens. thats a NoNo
As time passed, the king had lost count of both time and how many waves of enemy he had repelled, but estimated that it had to be approaching at least double digits. - Jarno_Vdkolk2mthCommented
We've been talking about getting elephants inside a city for half a chapter now. I get that webnovel has strict daily post requirements but the fillers are getting seriously annoying.
They looked at all the huge size of their 'enemy', heard the occasional angry trumpeting cries, and observed the swords that were menacingly tied to the animal's tusks. - Jarno_Vdkolk2mthReplied to settapong29
Must be the Prince and the legendary army skills he inherited father. đ
"Damn it! We can't turn. There is not enough space!" It was only then they understood just how narrow a place they had driven their animals into. - Jarno_Vdkolk2mthCommented
So we've had about 3/4 chapters about a gate that wouldn't open? đ
However, it seemed Grahtos did not need to do anything, as Philips's men who were charging into the city found themselves colliding with their own men who were trying to escape the battle, thus creating a clog of their own. - Jarno_Vdkolk2mthCommented
If those veteran mercenaries where so great, Why not slowly retreat to the gate in a organized manner. Then block it off/shield it while opening it from the inside?
Meaning the initial 6 that were tasked with snapping the gate down had been switched after they had gotten tired with a fresh batch, and then swapped back in once they had recuperated long enough. - Jarno_Vdkolk3mthReplied to Martialmath1702
They don't know how many forces the capital has or what other powers will do. Alexander sieging alone with only a legion worth of troops would be the highlight of stupidity. Don't forget ZanZan won't survive without him, His sons are to young and females hold to little power in that era.
Placing his large, heavy palms on the wooden table thus he declared in a deep, commanding voice, - Jarno_Vdkolk3mthCommentedAs I walked home from school, lost in thought, I failed to notice the speeding truck hurtling toward me.
- Jarno_Vdkolk3mthCommentedMy days consisted of college, homework, and the occasional video game session.
- Jarno_Vdkolk3mthCommentedHello,
- Jarno_Vdkolk3mthCommented
Perhaps you should've confirmed a sale before taking out a loan.
The night had already settled in, and James couldn't help but feel disheartened. Only one week had passed since he took the loan, and he was already burdened with the pressure of paying the first installment. The worst part was that he hadn't even earned a single unit to put towards it. As he walked through the marketplace, he couldn't escape the overwhelming feeling of disappointment. - Jarno_Vdkolk3mthReplied to rayman9248
They're not divine cultivators ;)
Cultivation technique : Essence Harmonization Lv 1 (0.096%)(Divine) - Jarno_Vdkolk3mthCommented
Now we know why she's cheaper.
Her crimson eyes sparkled with arrogance as they peered down at Kevin, and a sly smirk danced across her glossy red lips. With a hint of condescension in her tone, she couldn't help but remark, "Another virgin, huh?" Oh, the audacity! - Jarno_Vdkolk3mthCommented
A single inn offers 6000 prostitutes?
Once Kevin dove into the vast sea of potential partners, he had to do some serious filtering. He swiped left on all the "normal" ones, which brought the list down from a whopping 6000 to a more manageable 734 cultivators. "Phew, that's still a lot to choose from!" Kevin said, rubbing his temples like a man trying to decide between pizza toppings. - Jarno_Vdkolk3mthReplied to UnhinderedWanderer
Considering his treatment to Sia and the fact she was willing to do him not knowing he was a cultivator, It'd say she does give something.
"Haa haaa." Kevin breathed heavily as he sliced the dark knife through the air. It had been 5 days since he registered at the Cultivations Association, and a pleasant surprise awaited him when he opened his smart bracelet's message box. There was a file labeled "Soldier Blade: Guide to Wield Long Knives," sent by Samira, accompanied by a text that read, "Hope you will get strong and return me the favor." - Jarno_Vdkolk3mthReplied to Gabbu_Xul
Finally someone that gets it.
Both women were lost in thoughts of their future, which now seemed intertwined with Kevin, whose own future remained uncertain. - Jarno_Vdkolk3mthCommented
* She hadn't experienced so much pleasure in a entire month, Let alone a hour.
Sia appeared troubled and embarrassed. She had initially promised to make Kevin orgasm so intensely that he wouldn't be able to walk straight. However, during the one-hour bus ride to the city, Kevin had made her orgasm four times, which was a lot for such a short duration. She couldn't recall experiencing so much pleasure in a single hour, let alone a whole month.