Rei_Pernalonga

This reminded me of school days, where the teacher taught us how to germinate seeds in cotton when we were children.

Author, please try to avoid using names suggested by AI as much as possible. I had the displeasure of reading two novels created by AI, and they both had the same name for the city where the story took place, “Eldoria.” I even criticized this at the time. Later, while reading your novel, to be exact, in chapter 13, you used the name “Eldoria” for the city where the academy is located. To give you an idea, I asked ChatGPT to create a fantasy novel that starts in a medieval city to see if it would name the city “Eldoria,” and unsurprisingly, it created a novel titled “The Secret of Eldoria.”

An interesting fact is that in both the first novel I read, where it was obvious it was written by an AI, and in this one, the name of the city where the novel begins is Eldoria. Funny, isn’t it? It must be a prerequisite 😂😂😂.

This is the second novel I’ve read this week that was written by an AI. In the other one, it was obvious that it was made by an AI. In this one, the author tried to disguise it, but it didn’t work at all because the extremely robotic dialogue the protagonist has with a stranger out of nowhere in the first chapter gave it all away.

“It’s obvious that this novel was created by artificial intelligence. Just to confirm my suspicions, I used a site that compares texts, and unsurprisingly, it showed that it was 100% created by an AI.”

A great read for those who want to pass the time reading a novel in which the protagonist has an overpower system that doesn’t require doing boring missions to become strong, or worse, missions with a death penalty if not completed. Let’s face it, we know that in these cases the protagonist never fails the mission, so I don’t know why they include that, since no reader likes that kind of system.

I've read the first 49 chapters, and so far, I have nothing serious to complain about. The protagonist has a tragic past that adds depth to the character, providing an interesting path for development. The world where the story takes place offers many fascinating possibilities. The only thing I have to complain about is the changes in narrative perspective and when the author reveals something that will happen in the near future, only to later return to the present and describe how that thing happened. Both complaints are based on my opinion, and others may find them positive. I hope the author continues writing this novel and improves more and more.

Although I don't usually make comments, especially because English is not my native language, I feel compelled to share my thoughts on this work. The way the author handles the balance of the character's power, even though it's very overpowering, is impressive in using the limitations within the rules of this power and the laws of this fictional world. The introduction of new characters isn't just to fill gaps; it's a tactic that enriches the story, providing a background and motivations for each of them. The world where the story unfolds gives the author a bunch of possibilities for the plot to develop, resulting in a balanced narrative that incorporates conversations and fights without always staying the same, avoiding the boredom that some stories have of only having action or just conversation. This is great because it avoids the monotony that many novels on this site end up having, focusing too much on conflicts or dialogue.

I hope the author continues with this wonderful novel.I hope the author continues with this wonderful novel.I hope the author continues with this wonderful novel.

I highly recommend it to anyone looking to marathon a good novel with a good protagonist and great action. (Sorry if my english isn't good because I'm using Google translator)