MMike

So uh, 2k words is a surprising amount of words...

This novel is great! I love the characters (though the main character's sibblings' personalities overlap a bit too much for my lickings), the world build they are in and the overall plot. My only issue is that the pacing can feel a bit rushed at times and the the side characters lack any real depth but other than that, great job author! Keep the good work up.

I love the characters and the lore the world has. Have a few issues with the writing here and there and how some segments drag on for far too long but overall, it's really good.