DollyRoma
š Horror, gore and dark romance š Doting male leads and steamy fantasy romance rule my imagination. š¤ Check out my novels! š Let's connect --> Instagram: dolly_.roma Discord: DollyRoma#7887
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They might as well tear each other's clothes off and get to business right there too š
Ohh Allison is a guy š«¢
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Hey Jennifer! Happy New Year š I just wanted to let you know that I rewrote this novel completely and re-published it under the title: "Eclipse of Poisoned Hearts". I believe you'll like it very much. Please check it out when you have the time and let me know what you think š«¶ Thanks for your support!
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That series is actually one of my biggest motivations š
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It would most certainly do a lot better in the male lead category but I do believe you have two options: 1. Allow more romance into the novel and let it remain in the female lead category. Or 2. Have the female lead share the protagonist role with a male lead and put the novel in the male lead category. Ultimately itās up to you, but these are the options Iām seeing for you to achieve success in either category. Also, youāll need to change the cover, thereās a saying that says donāt just a book by its cover, but the readers always do. I suggest getting a more attractive cover design. Thank you for considering my advice. š
To begin, I wish the synopsis was more attractive. It made the story sound like a novel that needed to be in the male lead category and overall lacked excitement. Secondly, the author is obviously most likely a fan of anime and manga based on the plot. I read a manga recently with a plot very very similar to this, not saying the story is stolen or anythingā¦no no no, Iām just saying it couldāve been a bit more original. Lastly, as an avid reader of romance novels, I honestly do not think this novel will do very well in the female lead category. Its themes and elements are more suited for male audiences. However, updates are consistent and the grammar is more than decent. There was unfortunately no poetry in the wording so reading didnāt immerse me in the novel but itās best quality is that it is a good plot. I hope the author isnāt negatively swayed by my words, but this is my honest review. All the best with your writing š«¶