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Sir_Traverse

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  • Sir_Traverse
    Sir_Traverse9h
    Replied to Haku_Ouroboros

    Naah xD

    Ch 17 17: God Hand.
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  • Sir_Traverse
    Sir_Traverse9h
    Replied to Haku_Ouroboros

    Nice!

    Ch 17 17: God Hand.
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    The fabric of reality was disrupted as impossible staircases that defied the logic of normal space appeared, surrounding Guts, the girl, and the Count. But just before the domain closed, a purple line interrupted everything, and the whinnying of a horse broke the silence. 
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    The fabric of reality was disrupted as impossible staircases that defied the logic of normal space appeared, surrounding Guts, the girl, and the Count. But just before the domain closed, a purple line interrupted everything, and the whinnying of a horse broke the silence. 
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    "Stop! Don't hurt my father anymore!" a young girl dressed in noble robes came running to the scene, panting with sweat, but still, wearily, she stepped between Guts and the Count, raising her arms to block the swordsman's advance.
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    On the other hand, Guts saw that damned Apostle, one of those who had participated in that damned darkness and who had taken away one of his few friends. The image of that creature with the two parts of Pippin on his limbs, showing them off like a trophy, made his determination to kill him grow stronger.
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    How shall I put it? His form was grotesque, Samus and Ciri felt uncomfortable at the sight of him, the obvious phallic appearance of the monster before them and his strange appendages didn't make him beautiful, they only made him worse. Meanwhile, Guts watched the figure in the smoke and fire with hatred, but this time it was not anger that ruled his mind, but coldness.
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    There was a figure sitting on the stage, enjoying a glass of wine and the bloody spectacle that was taking place, he felt a morbid pleasure at the sight of the decapitated body of the 'witch', he had wanted to eat her as he had done with the woman's relatives, but sometimes seeing the suffering of these filthy 'heathens' also gave him satisfaction. 
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  • Sir_Traverse
    Sir_Traverse1d
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    Thanks!

    Ch 15 15: Dream journey.
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    Sir_Traverse1d
    Replied to reader12143546

    Thanks!

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  • Sir_Traverse
    Sir_Traverse1d
    Replied to Savage_C00KIE

    Devil? Nah Dragon Slayer? Sounds good, but she can't use magic. Maybe she can create something using a dragon lacrima.

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  • Sir_Traverse
    Sir_Traverse1d
    Replied to Haku_Ouroboros

    Claro. Entonces disfruta :')

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  • Sir_Traverse
    Sir_Traverse1d
    Replied to Alexia_Possible

    Hmmm, thinking about this, she can create something useful with a magic core or a magic objetct. Is a good idea!

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  • Sir_Traverse
    Sir_Traverse1d
    Replied to Haku_Ouroboros

    Si no entiendes lo que estoy tratando de explicarte, no encuentro sentido el seguir haciéndolo. Pero lo haré por última vez: no tiene "muletas" su fuerte está en su gran físico y en el control de la energía del entorno, está última le permite ser capaz de realizar hazañas como las descritas hasta ahora en la historia como lanzar rayos, provocar explosiones o crear luz pura para eliminar espíritus, aunque este último ataque no sirvió contra un ser quebla superaba en fuerza por mucho. Usa pociones, amuletos y talismanes como objetos auxiliares, eso no se niega, pero eso es parte de lo que la hace ella, no es un personaje op, es un personaje con límites reales, carencias que trata de resolver con cosas que ella misma puede crear e investigar. Prefiero mil veces escribir un personaje así, porque da pie a muchas cosas interesantes y divertidas. Esta historia no es una fantasía de poder o un cumplimiento de deseos, tampoco una colección de sistemas de poderes diversos. Cómo dije, Samus se hará fuerte físicamente y no solo eso, con su exploración del mundo y sus reglas podrá crear más cosas interesantes, mejores pociones, amuletos interesantes y diversos talismanes. Incluso nuevos ataques, nuevas matrices, nuevas aplicaciones de los fenómenos naturales. La magia se la dejamos a personajes mágicos, por eso se incluye a Ciri en la trama, aparte de que me gusta ese personaje. Pero debo decir que incluso sin Ciri, Samus hubiese encontrado una forma de viajar a otros mundos, aunque de manera más tosca y complicada, pero lo hubiese hecho, incluso si tuviese que pelear con el monstruo tentáculo del universo adyacente al de Futurama. Para finalizar, no responderé más comentarios tuyos de este estilo a menos que tengan ideas, correcciones o sugerencias, siento que si aún no te parece adecuado lo que he estado haciendo, ouedes simplemente dejar de leer y quitar la historia de tu biblioteca, hay muchas historias de personajes OP por ahí, de seguro encuentras lo que pareces buscar en este fanfic y no encuentras.

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  • Sir_Traverse
    Sir_Traverse1d
    Replied to Haku_Ouroboros

    Si has leído lo que va de historia sabrás que lo que dices es en efecto solo cosas de apoyo, lo verdaderamente importante de la tecno-alquimia es la sensibilidad y control de la energía presente en el entorno, ya sea la naturaleza o el universo, y las cosas que puede hacer con ellas, las matrices que puede crear, los fenómenos físicos, biológicos y químicos que puede provocar. Es sutil, pero poderoso. Samus no fue escrita par ser un personaje mágico, sino uno que mezcle la ciencia con lo esotérico. Tampoco es una novela de cumplimiento de deseos o fantasía de poder, y sobretodo, también es buena en el apartado físico. Un par de puños bien puestos resuelven muchos problemas.

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  • Sir_Traverse
    Sir_Traverse1d
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    De hecho, no. Porque lo que usa ahora, la tecno-alquimia, tiene mucho potencial futuro~

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