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ElPrimo

ElPrimo

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2022-01-26 JoinedUnited States
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  • ElPrimo
    ElPrimo2yr
    Commented

    It can be a friend too.

    Lucifer frowned. The call was from Julien's family? 
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    Inhuman Warlock
    Fantasy · Demonic_angel
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  • ElPrimo
    ElPrimo2yr
    Commented

    a lot of things going on

    Ch 690 Chapter 690: Dragon has fallen
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    Inhuman Warlock
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  • ElPrimo
    ElPrimo2yr
    Replied to ElPrimo
    Ch 688 Chapter 688: Contact
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  • ElPrimo
    ElPrimo2yr
    Commented

    Hello, this is Microsoft Tech Support, how can I help you?

    Ch 688 Chapter 688: Contact
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  • ElPrimo
    ElPrimo2yr
    Posted

    This novel is awesome. Character design is the best part of it, with so many characters with different personalities and powers. Its my favorite novel rn.

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  • ElPrimo
    ElPrimo2yr
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    Well, it's the truth.

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    Soul Split
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  • ElPrimo
    ElPrimo2yr
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    I guess rainwater and juices from fruits. Do you think I should add that in?

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    Soul Split
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  • ElPrimo
    ElPrimo2yr
    Posted

    Liked your story. Writing Quality is really good, Having no obvious grammar mistakes just makes the whole process smooth when I read it. I also like these types of novels a lot. Definitely recommend it.

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    Zhoro's Universe:Loose Screws
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  • ElPrimo
    ElPrimo2yr
    Commented

    I didn't see any grammar mistakes very well done. Looking forward to the next chapter.

    Ch 14 Capture The Flag (2/2)
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  • ElPrimo
    ElPrimo2yr
    Commented

    I used to get left out in PE class when this happens

    Everyone scrambled to find teammates.
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  • ElPrimo
    ElPrimo2yr
    Commented

    HOLD IT IN!!

    "Er, how long will this session take, my bladder's kinda small and I don't know if I can- "
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  • ElPrimo
    ElPrimo2yr
    Commented

    Reading this somehow made my nose itch.

    Still not processing that his limbs were bound to a metal chair, he attempted to scratch his nose and, only then, did he realize the situation that he was in.
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  • ElPrimo
    ElPrimo2yr
    Replied to ElPrimo

    Some grammar mistakes here and there but It doesn't affect the story.

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    This book has no chapters read Will Fate Bring Us Together
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  • ElPrimo
    ElPrimo2yr
    Posted

    I don't really read romance novels but I gotta say, this is pretty nice. The story development is good. Keep up the good work, I am waiting for more chapters.

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  • ElPrimo
    ElPrimo2yr
    Replied to UniVerseLessOne

    Yeah same. Its good though.

    Ch 1 Chapter 26
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  • ElPrimo
    ElPrimo2yr
    Commented

    rich dude

    He was the C.E.O of the fashion company since it's his family business, Jason worked hard to be the best he wanted so I guess it's luck plus hard work that he's where he is now.
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  • ElPrimo
    ElPrimo2yr
    Commented

    nice

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  • ElPrimo
    ElPrimo2yr
    Commented

    Yeah this is pretty sad

    I was so confused about boundaries it's been a while I realized the truth at an unexpected moment. I loved him for 5 years and planned the future with him, but I guess I moved on too fast I was sure he loved me back, he never made me feel vulnerable he was always good to me that it felt like a dream, he put meaning into everything and made endless metaphors, I always believed I was extraordinary to him, he made me feel like I was the only person leaving in his world.
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  • ElPrimo
    ElPrimo2yr
    Replied to Rayne_Rue

    Ty!

    Ch 2 New Body
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  • ElPrimo
    ElPrimo2yr
    Replied to Rayne_Rue

    Thanks for the support! I'll keep uploading chapters!

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