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RNSha

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  • RNSha
    RNSha1yr
    Posted

    As a few comments started, the first chapter is indeed heart breaking and full of action. The story pulls you right in. Well-written, action-packed, it is a must read.

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    I Spy Two Haters/Lovers
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  • RNSha
    RNSha1yr
    Commented

    Yes, how is it possible?

    "But witnesses tell us that there was a roar of guns in that area. How is it possible that there was not a single bullet?" Journee was confused.
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    I Spy Two Haters/Lovers
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  • RNSha
    RNSha1yr
    Commented

    Looking forward to the picnic

    Ch 10 Our next move
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    I Spy Two Haters/Lovers
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  • RNSha
    RNSha1yr
    Commented

    Oh, he is impressed

    "So, there was this girl who was in the next room to Zion's. I couldn't see her face, her hair was all over it. I don't how but she too knew about the cameras and also that I removed every single one of them. They were safe in my pocket but the sleight of her hand was so amazing that she swiped every single one of the cameras from my pocket and I had no idea," narrated Archer.
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  • RNSha
    RNSha1yr
    Commented

    Cynical

    "He does, Theo not so much. He rarely trusts anyone," responded Archer.
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    I Spy Two Haters/Lovers
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  • RNSha
    RNSha1yr
    Commented

    True

    "I am the bodyguard of Zion, the Don, well the new Don. I have responsibilities. Every eye is on me, I can't just walk in the federal plaza whenever I want to," explained Archer.
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    I Spy Two Haters/Lovers
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  • RNSha
    RNSha1yr
    Commented

    Oh, will he find her?

    Ch 9 That smart girl
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    I Spy Two Haters/Lovers
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  • RNSha
    RNSha1yr
    Commented

    I would love to learn how to pick a lock

    Tony shook his head in disbelief and handed a leather pouch to Archer. Archer unfolded the pouch and took out a tension wrench and an offset diamond pick. Within seconds he picked all the pins of the lock and turned the tension wrench. The lock clicked open. He softly pushed the door open.
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    I Spy Two Haters/Lovers
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  • RNSha
    RNSha1yr
    Commented

    yes, she did give him her address

    Then suddenly a bulb lit over his head. She told him her address. She whispered it in his ears. Now it was necessary for him to go meet with the Assistant Director, Chris. Someone else was keeping an eye on Zion and he wanted to know everything about them.
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    I Spy Two Haters/Lovers
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  • RNSha
    RNSha1yr
    Commented

    Going on well, author

    Ch 8 Who was she?
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    I Spy Two Haters/Lovers
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  • RNSha
    RNSha1yr
    Commented

    Awesome pacing

    Ch 7 Common elements
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    I Spy Two Haters/Lovers
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  • RNSha
    RNSha1yr
    Commented

    This is extreme

    Zion just smiled at him and nodded. True to Archer's words, after spending a few hours, they came out of the tent and moved towards the area where they parked the car. To their surprise, the whole car was destroyed and set on fire. It appeared that glass was shattered with a heavy object and the car was set on fire. The car that was previously a luxurious SUV was not reduced to a tin box that was covered in multiple bullet holes and was smelling like hot metal. Archer took a deep breath and threw the key to the car in a dumpster nearby in anger. The car was useless now.
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  • RNSha
    RNSha1yr
    Commented

    Poor boy

    "Killed in gang activity," Archer's voice suddenly became sad. He cleared his throat after talking about his mother. He even avoided looking at Zion.
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  • RNSha
    RNSha1yr
    Commented

    he needs doctor, soon

    "Nothing. Hide here for hours and then I will take you home," groaned Archer and looked at his feet. The blood kept dripping drop by drop. The lower half of his trousers was all wet with blood.
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  • RNSha
    RNSha1yr
    Commented

    DK, Drag King

    Archer knew that he had to shake them and escape. They were about to pass by a homeless community when he drag-parked the car and immediately switched off all the lights and the engine of the car.
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  • RNSha
    RNSha1yr
    Commented

    This action packed

    Ch 6 Boss
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  • RNSha
    RNSha1yr
    Replied to josha_1920

    My thoughts exactly.

    Archer was lying over Zion. "Follow me," he said. He helped Zion to stand up and started dragging him away to the corner from which he found him. Before they could reach the corner that was away from the bullet zone, a bullet sneaked its way to Archer and struck his legs. He stumbled as he felt the bullet in his calf. The blood started pouring out.
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    I Spy Two Haters/Lovers
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  • RNSha
    RNSha1yr
    Commented

    Nice description

    Everyone started running in all directions and took shelter behind sturdy things. There were cars and tables and metal doors. Bullets started flying. Ricochets after ricochets, bang after bang, sparks after sparks made the scene chaotic. All the goons were firing blindly. They had no idea from which direction the bullet came.
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    I Spy Two Haters/Lovers
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  • RNSha
    RNSha1yr
    Commented

    He is absolutely right

    "When you work for people, make sure to research about the boss and upper management first. You hurt so I hurt you," educated Theo.
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    I Spy Two Haters/Lovers
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  • RNSha
    RNSha1yr
    Commented

    face slapping moment!!!

    Theo looked at Archer who was standing beside Dudley still clasping Zion's hair in his hand. After Theo gave him a look he slowly let go of Zion's hair. Without removing his right hand that had the gun pointed at Dudley, Theo slapped Archer hard on his face with the back of his left hand. Thwack! The whole arena echoed with the sound of the slap.
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