Kech_Wood

Well, that threw Me off, LOL Reading PV chapters in DPS

digestive tract, not track

*rank 4, not level, lol

I thought he was level 4?

vassal state

nigh impossible

negated

Another thing... why is a 12 year old boy getting "hot and bothered"? He's too young to be having those kinds of thoughts yet.

I would rate this higher, but the grammar and spelling leaves much to be desired. The plot is decent, so far. (Am only 50 some chapters in.) The characters could use a little work, as they all seem ignorant or dumb, but maybe it gets better in later chapters. The background/extra info is a bit confusing. Personally, I think the author shouldn't try to go so deep with the explanations. Makes certain things seem contradictory. All in all, I won't spend any money, coins, or FP's on this book unless there's a complete overhaul in the editing. Which sucks because I'm really into the plot itself.

nigh impossible