Amazing, I love every part of this story. I see that the rest of it is going to be dark and sad, but honestly I love when stories take a turn like that.

I need more already!!!

Another fantastic story you have written. I love how you twisted the ending into something that was not even considered!!! Dang! I got goosebumps while reading this!

That was so so so great! I loved the whole dang story!!!! I thought it was amazing. I was not considering any of that. The whole plot is awesome. I got to tell you, you are an amazing writer!.