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Chibi_9139

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  • Chibi_9139
    Chibi_91394d
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    I'm just making sure you mean the name is Cassarae, yes?

    Cassandra was right about the spawn rate becoming faster. The speed would increase until one of these villages appeared somewhere around her Rudimentary Village at least once a week, and very soon they wouldn't be Rudimentary Villages anymore.
    Genetic Ascension
    Fantasy · Awespec
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  • Chibi_9139
    Chibi_91394d
    Commented

    it should be 'directly ignored it for the time being' instead of from

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    Genetic Ascension
    Fantasy · Awespec
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  • Chibi_9139
    Chibi_91394d
    Commented

    pain*

    Sylas braced himself, remembering the horrid paid it took to assimilate Common Genes. He found something to bite onto and then moved his intention toward [Yes].
    Genetic Ascension
    Fantasy · Awespec
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  • Chibi_9139
    Chibi_91397d
    Replied to NunuXD

    Hey, why does this have r18 tag? just in case or future plans?

    Gamer Superstar
    Fantasy · NunuXD
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  • Chibi_9139
    Chibi_913918d
    Posted

    Personally I like this story. However, most of the time it almost feels like a slice-of-life genre so bear that in mind, the progression is incredibly slow-paced, and the synopsis is somewhat misleading for those thinking this is a story of a kickass gangster reincarnated into a cultivation world. Perhaps with further progress in the story, it could lead towards that direction, but as of ch 170~ the majority of the story feels non-canon to the overall plot. ps- wtf happened to the editing staff (or even autocorrect), somehow from around ch 165 the quality of writing and grammar mistakes are almost unbearable. To the point that you can't follow what's happening in the story. Author-san please look into this ;-;

    Legend of The Young Master
    Eastern · Nobelnerd
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  • Chibi_9139
    Chibi_913925d
    Posted

    Incredibly similar premise to Scholar's Advanced Technological System. The latter goes more in-depth regarding the specifics of the technology and build-up to produce them. Other than that there are some incredibly cringe moments where mc acts like he's a 5yr old shouting. I can't even definitively call that a face-slapping tag, it's 100% cringe.

    Building a Business Empire with my Technological System
    Sci-fi · Faux1231
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  • Chibi_9139
    Chibi_91391mth
    Posted

    immense potential but I'm not sure if the author cares about this story or is simply forced/uninspired about their work. After the first dozen chapters, this novel is comparable to MTL novels in that the dialogue makes no sense, mostly out of order, or there is no clear distinction between reflective and vocal dialogue. Finally, my main gripe is the inconsistent spelling of names and frequent swapping of a character's pronouns.

    Reborn as a Dragon with Devouring System
    Fantasy · Rqmk
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  • Chibi_9139
    Chibi_91393mth
    Replied to TheGodlyFateFox

    for real though, author should just ctrl+f every instance of 'nutty' for amazing or awesome. Nutty is so damn weird

    Scholar's Advanced Technological System
    Urban · Morning Star LL
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  • Chibi_9139
    Chibi_91394mth
    Posted

    well, don't bother reading this novel unless you plan to read only up to ch364, because the names of everything/everyone suddenly changes. And from some other reviews that I've belatedly found, the abrupt name change fiasco happens for multiple characters in future chapters again.. ps. I was really enjoying the translation for this novel, truthfully this novel is better than its counterpart black tech internet cafe too

    Bringing Culture to a Different World
    Fantasy · Sister's Bride
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  • Chibi_9139
    Chibi_91394mth
    Commented

    heads up, end of chapter needs a fix ' Lirael paused, then she glanced at nux and, ' replace nux with vaan

    Ch 156 How shameful
    Magic's Return: I Can See The Spirits
    Fantasy · SleepDeprivedSloth
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  • Chibi_9139
    Chibi_91395mth
    Commented

    any1 else feel like at some point Natalyas character started becoming annoying?

    Ch 2507 Nutritious Resource
    Divine Emperor of Death
    Eastern · Stardust_Breaker
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  • Chibi_9139
    Chibi_91397mth
    Replied to Dredd44

    there are conflicting mentions of Yazdegerd and Theodosius' mother being in control via proxy. I'm perplexed on this point.. isn't Yazdegerd the Sassanid king? how is the eastern border with his empire a threat if he moved west to confront Marcellus

    Ch 83 Titus Claudius Marcellus Must Die!
    Heir of Aurelian
    History · Zentmeister
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  • Chibi_9139
    Chibi_91398mth
    Commented

    is there supposed to be some kind of dialogue or something here? it's just showing as ~ .... ??? xXx for the next few lines

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    The Tellus Mage
    Fantasy · Junethephatcat
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  • Chibi_9139
    Chibi_91398mth
    Replied to Z_Ril

    well also around the time he starts developing his alter ego(?) I guess, the inner dialogues he's having are shown as just a bunch of '......' or 'Xxxxx' I'm almost certain that's not intended..

    The Tellus Mage
    Fantasy · Junethephatcat
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  • Chibi_9139
    Chibi_91398mth
    Commented

    Can’t view the next two chapters?

    Ch 95 Only fools stay on a sinking boat
    Magic's Return: I Can See The Spirits
    Fantasy · SleepDeprivedSloth
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  • Chibi_9139
    Chibi_91399mth
    Commented

    this isn't the worst english i've seen, but there are some rather obvious grammar mistakes that could easily be fixed with a spellcheck or sentence structure app.

    Ch 14 Pandemonium
    The Martial Unity
    Action · Lord_Streak
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  • Chibi_9139
    Chibi_91391yr
    Posted

    A very typical harem novel. The story makes sense but the MC's character changes too fast without explanation. My biggest complaint would be that author first person to write most sentences. Though it's free novel so can't complain too much

    Lust Knight
    Fantasy · LamenThief
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  • Chibi_9139
    Chibi_91391yr
    Posted

    Good enough romance, but it's not a 5/5 considering ML somehow falls in love with FL within seconds even though he's portrayed as cold-hearted due to his past. My second point of contention would be that I assume the author has little to no knowledge of showbiz (though even without you could somehow still make a better plot), otherwise, I fail to understand why every plot regarding FL at work is revolving around sabotage instead of actual adversity. Nonetheless, I did enjoy this novel though I would recommend taking the synopsis with a grain of salt, it's misleading and if you didn't know better, assume it's not even the same novel.

    Daddy CEO's Beloved Wife
    Urban · Poisonlily
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  • Chibi_9139
    Chibi_91391yr
    Posted

    Sigh. The summary sounds interesting and I like stories in this genre, unfortunately, as a native English speaker, there is just too much broken English and grammar (as of chapter 3) that I don't think I can give this novel a fair chance. I recommend getting an editor author-san.

    Rebirth: Dancing In My Destiny
    Urban · PurpleLight
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  • Chibi_9139
    Chibi_91391yr
    Posted

    Initially, the story was great, it had me hooked until around 300 chapters in. But then I think the author ran out of ideas to challenge the MC and FL's relationship. Like, come onnnnnnn, how the hell can Talia walk in on some ex trying to seduce Damon 50 times over and over and over again. This repetitive troupe alone is so off-putting that I unfortunately can't continue reading past 600 chapters

    The Alpha's Bride
    Fantasy · RedSonia
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