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BSart1yrCommentedyou have a typo here but *most of it
"These are documents that are several decades old and pertain to the Glowing Woods. As you can see all of them are not in pristine condition and the information might be a bit out of date, but mot of it will still be fairly accurate. Plus, these are much more affordable since most owls disregard them. Still, while they might not be the best, it is better to have some information rather than none." Evelyn explained.- BSart1yrCommented
I think you meant *expensive for me to use
"I know that this is the place where all owls within the Roost are registered, and that it serves as a storage for other information of all manners. But that is about it. Other than when I first arrived, I have not been back here. Most of my time has been spent doing day labor jobs and going to my scheduled classes. I have not really had much time to come here and most fo the information is too experience for me to use." Aralee, said, a bit embarrassed. - BSart1yrCommented
I noticed you make this mistake multiple times I just never bothered to correct it before but I think that instead of tired you meant to write *tried
'Even a low tier awakened beast would have gotten sick if they tired to absorb that much magical energy at once. How is she still moving around without any problems?' - BSart1yrCommented
I thing it should be *to forget
Alcohol had become his crutch to forgot and numb the loss of his beloved wife, even if it was at the detriment of his children. - BSart1yrCommented
*have arrived
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*something
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*every single
Wu Jing cautiously moved forward and did not take any chances. He immediately activated his ability and burnt ever single corpse that he could find. - BSart1yrCommented
*fear
Her voice grew a little stronger as each word came out a little bit icier than the last. By the last command, everyone showed slight dear before gathering to sit around the table, posturing themselves in a respectful manner. - BSart1yrPosted
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*sure
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*when they were already alone
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*as she drifted away
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*she also visited the guild whenever she was free. *But now she was really getting curious.
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*wagging from side to side
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*followed and took a seat
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*could hear were muffled noises
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*today it seemed that they were inside their rooms
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*they could see the rain
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*in the sink
She went to the bathroom and washed her face on the sink. She then took a towel and wiped her face. - BSart2yrCommented
*climbed out of her bed
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