I will keep this in mind. Thank you.

Thank you.

Thank you.

That is why I am doing a rewrite. To fix these issues.

I thought I replied to this comment when I saw it earlier, but apparently I didn't so... Merry Christmas!

Author here. Frisk was wearing something like this.

Yes, it is. I advise you not to read it.

I dropped that novel. I feel like I fumbled that novel so badly, that I am almost ashamed to even be associated with it. I am however planning on writing a different novel with the same concept. I just need to plan out everything first before I start publishing.

Hello there. I wanted to respond to your comment in that review, but for some reason the comment didn't show up, so I will be writing this here. To clarify, I am doing a complete rewrite of the novel, with a new plot and a new planned direction. All chapters will be rewritten to fit the new plot. I am sorry if any confusion occurred due to my poor choice of words.

Thank you reader! I appreciate the gift.

I am sorry if you feel disappointed. I am currently going through a rewrite of the novel, to fix a lot of issues with the story.

I completely understand. I am currently going through a rewrite of the novel, to fix a lot of issues presented in it. It will take some time though .

I have. However, I don't think i will get to explore them as much in this novel.

Yes. He does.

They are somewhere in the city of Vallina. Being held hostage by Rose in one way or the other.

Whoops! My mistake. Sorry about that! I will get to fixing it.

Oh, I see! Thanks for the advice. I appreciate it.

Fair Enough. I will make some edits to make it more believe.

It might have something to do with Webnovel, because I did not write my novel in Chinese. I don't know how to write in Chinese, (let alone speak the language).Here are the book details to prove it. You can check it for yourself if you want to.I am still sorry if I caused an inconvinience.

I have written the entire story in English. I am not sure where the Chinese Characters came in.