Elsatrio66
Once an addict reader of webnovels, now I hope to become a top writer in Global Webnovel.
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Elsatrio668mthCommentedActually what makes it feels bored not the repetitive plot, but Author reveals too much of every details instead of just giving clues for reader to guess. This kind of plot more insteresting to make mystery than oscar acting.I come here from the Manhua and no doubt it feel more amazing than the novel because the manhua don't explain too detail.
Then, he planned to get up, but it seemed that he had touched the injury, which made him pale again, coughing blood from his mouth, and appearing even weaker.- Elsatrio668mthCommented
only half a month? i though would be thousand years recuperating
"This time the magic power inheritor's scheme is really successful. Gu Changge is afraid that he won't be able to move the magic power within half a month." - Elsatrio661yrReplied to FANATIC
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I thank you all fellow readers who always accompany me reading this masterpiece. This story gave me inspiration to also try writing something. I humbly invite you all to my first story in Webnovel. It is a fanfiction based story of Boruto. Since I hate the original story that ruined the Narutoverse, I somehow wanna make a better version of this saga. The saga that putting all my experiences in reading many novels. I hope it will not dissapoint you all.
The End. - Elsatrio661yrCommented
I thank you all fellow readers who always accompany me reading this masterpiece. This story gave me inspiration to also try writing something. I humbly invite you all to my first story in Webnovel. It is a fanfiction based story of Boruto. Since I hate the original story that ruined the Narutoverse, I somehow wanna make a better version of this saga. The saga that putting all my experience in reading many novels. I hope it will not dissapoint you all.
Ultimate Origin Supreme - Elsatrio661yrCommentedCh 2 Chapter 1: Naruto Uzumaki
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lol, MC just have to sleep and the battle will end
"The second round is to challenge the strongest. All geniuses will join forces to challenge the Divine Might Heavenly Sage!" - Elsatrio661yrCommented
does the number correct?
"The first round of the Devil Trampling Road has ended. A total of 2742 geniuses have passed! - Elsatrio661yrCommented
The Party Above everything
If a disciple's favorability towards him decreased to the point where he was dissatisfied, he had to teach them a lesson or focus on them. - Elsatrio661yrCommented
Dont it evolve to Primordial Fiendcelestial first?
The three thousand Fiendcelestials could also evolve! - Elsatrio661yrCommented
cultivator actually more no life than actual no life
"What's the point of going out? My cultivation level can still increase. There's no need to go out!" the Black Hell Chicken said proudly. The Chaotic Heavenly Dog followed suit. - Elsatrio661yrCommented
not for mortal kids. 1000 years++ only.
Dao Comprehension Sword and Li Yao were very happy to see him and immediately surrounded him. - Elsatrio661yrCommented
he talked like it was not his own
"You went to the Consciousnessless Great Dao World when you went to save your disciples. This world was created by an existence that surpassed the Great Dao Supreme Realm. It's equivalent to a second Chaos. However, he was suppressed by the Ninth Chaos as soon as he created this world. The Consciousnessless Great Dao World was suppressed by the Chaos. All the Spirit Qi in the world was sucked away by the Chaos and the Consciousnessless Great Dao World became a place of nothingness." - Elsatrio661yrCommented
protagonist flag if only it is another story
"The number one prodigy of the Chaos… You said that I can't, but I have to try!" - Elsatrio661yrCommented
lol it really happen
Han Jue waited for her to finish before saying slowly, "Since the Holy Mother wants to resolve this karma, come to my Dao Field. You should know where it is. Our Dao discussion can also prove your attitude to many mighty figures." - Elsatrio661yrCommented
Holy Mother: " I have no way to repay you, let this billions years virgin body compensate your lost."
This grudge wouldn't be resolved if she didn't show some sincerity! - Elsatrio661yrCommented
I knew it. She is not stupid and maybe a prospect waifu.
The Holy Mother of Order said, "If I didn't create such an opportunity to overturn the Chaos or summoned so many mighty figures, the Great Dao Divine Spirits won't be convinced even if the matter calms down. Now that the Divine Might Heavenly Sage has already proved his strength, no matter how dissatisfied the Great Dao Divine Spirits are, they can only accept it. This is the best outcome." - Elsatrio661yrCommented
this fellow is spared.
"Cultivate well. I won't interfere in the matters of the Chaos. I look forward to the day you surpass the Chaos." - Elsatrio661yrCommented
since Gu Tianzsun also has Gu surname, that this mean he is an ancestor of MC?
Perhaps even Samsara Gu Tianzun himself did not expect that one day his secret technique would be used by Gu Changge in such a place.