I am very new to making stories. If I ever do make stories, please read through them before dropping them so quickly, like the term, 'Don't Judge A Book By Its Cover', Nice to meet you though!
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'With a horrified face, Leon fell to the ground, having cruel irony take its hold on him. He was the one to give hope to the others when they had lost theirs, but now he was the one to lose hope.' I think this change would be good.
The image of the building told them that it was fine but the inside contradicted that image. The bottom floor had collapsed due to the earthquakes and the entrance was gone. - I think this change would be good.
Instead of feeling joy once they reached their goal, their faces held expressions of fear and desperation. - I think this change would be good.
As they ran, the distance between their destination and them was narrowing. - I think this change would be good.
"We're here. This is the skyscraper we gotta climb if we want to make it out of here alive" - I think this change would be good.