Amai_Dolce

We got to the point where the story got altered by accident because of a characters appearance. We(I) tried to plan how to progress the story to make writing easier, but because of this one character, those plans got thrown out the window and now we're freeballing it. Until we stabilize the flow, the story will feel a bit random for a while as it progresses.

Amai is Japanese for Sweet, Dolce is Italian for Sweet as well. I am neither Japanese nor Italian. I just like sweets a lot.

I've been enjoying your inputs and corrections, but I don't intend to remove them because I think they're funny. But thanks either way.

I am malding so bad rn I can't focus.

idk what to do with that number lol. I just write stuff

So far, the themes being used are pretty standard for it's genre. While they are reused, I can tell the author's respect for the theme in his writing. That said, themes are ingredients and you can make different foods with the same ingredients. The only thing that will make it stand out is how he's going to cook it. So far, I can tell that it's palatable to enjoy reading. The story does seem very intriguing so far in the early chapters.

Thank you! I didn't notice I can send thanks for this.

Sorry about the delay. There has been a deliberation between Amai(me) and Nai(also me) about how we should progress the story and whether or not we should stop holding back on the disgusting parts. I'll try to be faster next time and not delay the updates further. Sorry about that.

It's annoying, really. But when this got contracted, I have a lot of restrictions. I'm just waiting for my CE to give me solutions to the problem.