Hey guys! Umm, author here. Just giving myself a shameless rating xD. I'd like to thank everyone who has read this novel so far, it means a lot to me. So, I realize that in some of the early chapters, there quite a lot of errors and stuff that I prolly could've written in a better way. Until I wrote the fifth chapter, I really couldn't find a style and was still learning on how to write in decent way, since this is my first work, its not an excuse or anything, but I thought I should make it clear. I'm still learning and I hope to improve with each day passing. And for this, I thought I'd rewrite the first four chapters, and re-upload it. I hope you guys can check it out and provide me any feedback. Lemme know if I should make any corrections. I'll try to be more expressive and show a bit more than what I wrote initially, info about stuff that I should've provided right from the start If you guys want to ask me anything, please do so in here. I'll try to respond to any questions to the best of my abilities. Once again, Thanks to everyone for sticking with this novel so far, I really appreciate it. Thanks, ZEROkun1015

The premise seems intriguing, the start is great but since only 4 chapters are out, its a bit too early to say anything. It really is promising and I'm looking forward to reading more of this. :)

yes, its my first time writing a novel. Thank you for commenting :). I hope to write better as it progresses.