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There are a lot of repetitions in the last chapters. This chapter is no different from the previous and the one before it. The writer repeats the character's ideas a lot, and his reasons are similar to trying to fill the gaps in the novel.

Hello, this is my review of the new version of the novel and the old version. First, the romance has changed. We can say that the old version had fast romance, or rather, it was from the beginning. We can say that it is like a fast, conventional romance. But in the new version, the romance has been modified to be a slow romance, and even the hero's character is very different from the previous character of the old novel.I also forgot to say that in the beginning of the old version I noticed that in the charisma part when it rises the main character's charm affects the people around him, but in the new version it seems that the effect of charisma is low. Or in other words, the writer is trying not to make a big impact. Also, there is an artificial intelligence part from the old version. It seems that the writer decided that there would be no artificial intelligence in the new version. What I like most about the decision made by the writer is that he made the hero’s background some mystery, unlike the old version, where the hero’s background and past were known, or I mean a great past. All we know is that his past is that he reached the pinnacle of martial arts. This is what he left us in ambiguity, but this is not really needed in the story. This is from my personal perspective.As for the main character's family, it has changed from a normal family in the old version to a kind of strange background family in the new version. His father is a retired or forced martial artist and his mother is like a princess. I want to say that what the writer did is not very bad, but I think it is a little better than the old version, I mean, although I prefer there to be better romance. Oh, as for my personal opinion, I don't like that elf girl. I find her personality annoying Now this is just my personal opinion I don't know if anyone has a different point of view

Correct But I meant character mc You don't seem like someone who thinks about Harem . Or the writer is thinking of going through the flowers I just hope he doesn't go through the Pokemon ways.

Good that's expected It's a good thing it's not a harem novel. If he agreed, I would have given the writer some doubt.

Thanks for the Chapter

I can't wait for the next chapter