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Lilc_7710mthReplied to LizbellaHello. How are you? Hope you're doing well. Sorry, been MIA. Work's been super crazy. I updated a mini part of a chapter which will continue in the next following pages. Let me know whether you like reading short snippets of a chapter or wait for a longer one. What do you think so far? How's your writing going? Hope to hear from you soon [img=Sigh]
Ch 3 Chapter 1.5 - Meanwhile in the Other Side of the World- Lilc_771yrCommented
It's a good introduction to our main FL. Though the FL seems more like an Antagonist just because she's being all haughty when there's no need towards her driver and her mother so she seems like an Anti-hero? Also, if you can explain who this Richard is more, it would be better. It's just confusing on who/why he would buy her a motorcycle. But overall, great job 👍Keep up the great work
Ch 1 Main reason - Lilc_772yrReplied to Zulu2018
Bingo! Remember, the other driver was never found...dun dun duh...
“We will then refund you your money, ma’am. We know this is an inconvenience for you and we apologize for it. But this is for your sake as well, ma’am. A defective machine such as him could be really dangerous to our precious clients.” - Lilc_772yrCommented
Yup...knew it. There's more to Sam than meets the eye. What are u hiding Samuel?
The blissful mood on her face was slowly erased the moment she heard what the woman said. She heard the feminine voice apologising to her and informing her that they intend to recall Sam back because he was apparently a factory defect. - Lilc_772yrReplied to Lilc_77Ch 13 CHAPTER 13
- Lilc_772yrCommentedCh 13 CHAPTER 13
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Sounds like she's just bitter and jaded b/c she's been around the wrong type of men...she needs to be around good men so she can see that not all men are the same
At that moment, she realized that her mistrust and phobia with men was much more serious than she had thought it was. Even without her phobia, she now thought it would be hard enough for her to open her heart and trust them. Maybe perhaps it was because she had grown up without a father? She heard that her mother had turned into such a cruel parent because her father had abandoned them when he had fallen in love with someone else. Then there was also her best friend, Karille’s husband, Hardy. She had known Hardy since they were in college. He was such a good man, and she had many times thought that Hardy and Karille were the most perfect and lovey-dovey couple that she had ever seen. They were just perfect for each other, and she knew just how much the two loved each other. They had the enviable kind of relationship that she thought would last forever – without a shadow of a doubt. But this same loving and devoted man, had cheated on Karille in the end as well. So much for the perfect and forever couple. - Lilc_772yrReplied to MonsterUnderTheBed
😉🤣🤣
Her hands landed on his hard and broad chest, stopping him from advancing. “I just told you I needed a boyfriend. I am not looking for a sex friend.” - Lilc_772yrReplied to MiloMarie
This is true but people wear leather all the time and leather is made from cow hide. Snake skin leather is just a fancier type of leather that's why genuine snakeskin is more expensive b/c it's a better material and waterproof to boot.
When Curtis followed Bai Qingqing's requirements to complete the strange piece of clothing and then saw where Bai Qingqing had put it on, his snake body instantly tensed up, and his pupils became a blood-colored vertical slit. - Lilc_772yrCommented
#TeamCurtis 😍🥰
Curtis soaked his scalded hands in the water and smiled as he looked at Bai Qingqing. "I'm glad you like it." - Lilc_772yrCommented
How could she be ok with Parker skinning the Wolf knowing that he was probably another shifter who transform into human? Would it be considered cannibalism too of they ate him? I would definitely be a vegetarian in this world if that's the case.
Parker instantly beamed with pleasure. He then happily skinned the wolf and cut open its chest. After rinsing it clean, he said to Bai Qingqing, "Okay, let's go."