AoraZ

read till ch 105 the entire ch felt forced like all he had to do was teleport to the guild get the fmc and escape. What does the author take us for like if it was atleast establisted that he cannot use the abilities in quick succession then maybe it would've been better, but even then he could just use a diff space ability to teleport. This novel is just plain dumb it doesn't explain anything like why he cant use abilities it just happens how the author wants it to happen. Mc's powers are just inconsistent. Atleast give some kind of explanation like its because of mana cost, also even if he does say its due to mana cost the author will have to edit the previous chs for it to make sense.

The initial chapters were a drag, thought it would get better later on but after reading till the chapter where Alice holds mc's collar and the headmaster was like "ah youth" i realised this book wasn't for me. Anyways Goodluck author(though i still hope alice isnt the fml).

think you forgot a stage, should be along the lines of soul formation

pretty sure thats the targets LAN

now i regret even thinking about finishing this chapter before quitting