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Interesting story so far. (So far on ch 20) I like how the mc isnt instantly overpowered. But the naivety of peoples emotions is a bit annoying between the mc, pei, and the protag girl. Will the mc start to sleep with some women?

Good chapter

Great chapter

The writing is very good. The premise is unique and the story is interesting. Keep releasing chapters, they are very good

Best 2 chapters

When yang ze creates only 1 clone like he did on the island, is he using the 7 illusion skill

Why can’t he ask for a divorce himself?

The premise is interesting and the writing is good. Morse whole goal is to save the world through his relationship with teh pheonix. But so far it seems he already accomplised his goal in 20 chapters. I would suggest adding something to break up that relationship, like adding a fiance of Morse who genuinely likes him and who had a past history with morse or something like the Phoenix killing morse father who causes morse to want revenge. Because so far saving the world seems to easy

The book has an interesting premise and the writing is pretty good. The smut is a nice addition to the usual zombie genre. So far the cast is good and hopefully more love interests will be introduced preferably ones like Mai when she figured out she had power. I hope you continue writing the novel

Very Interesting concept for a regression. The conflict of Cain wanting to always escape is very entertaining. The story sets it up well that he was treated very badly by the Moonshade family and so I hope he continues his indifference towards the moonshade sisters. The worst change would be if his character changed to becoming a simp again. Also I think it would be interesting if he finds out they can read his mind and he uses it to his advatage in order to break the pact