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Bro DID NOT need to mention that 😭

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World Language changes ability names to fit Skill naming conventions. But besides an in-canon reason, "Megalomaniac" is just a more unique and interesting name for an ability than just "Power Manipulation".

Unique Skill: Megalomaniac would be cool and fits the pattern of Unique Skill names being nous. "Manipulation" skills are usually Extra Skills.

Bro the narration and dialogue is really good, but is ruined by the block of text.

If an active Marine allows you to kill him does that make you stronger and more skilled than that Marine? No. Same thing with Veldora.A target that doesn't resist will obviously be easier than a target that does.

An interesting short read. I hope you pick this up again, author.

I was gonna address this in the story but since I'm not even sure when I'll continue it, I'll just tell you now. Where I'm from, school material gets pushed ahead. So materials that would be learned in later grade, gets taught in earlier grade.

Because of this comment, maybe I'll continue it.

You'll see in my Trash Collection story ideas that never made it past chapter 1, and there's a shit ton in my google doc's trash. I stopped continuing those because I lost passion, I got bored. But maybe because of your and some others's positive comment, I'll continue them.I'm not blocked, I still have ideas especially with Saki-chan and the glasses boy.