Hard to say much since it's only a few chapters in but what's here already is interesting and has potential to be really good. While the writing is different from what I used to I have to remember that things aren't the same with web novels. After taking a moment to get comfortable I found it very readable. There aren't any really bad typos or serious grammar mistakes that I noticed. The author has so far been very quick with releases and it's good that readers won't have to wait long for the story to continue when they're caught up. I hope this keeps up. Now for the things that I personally care about most. The story still needs time to get the ball rolling, but what we've already got will make the reader curious for more. This is what the beginning of a story is supposed to do. As for the world, again it's still early but we're learning bit by bit and I'm sure we'll see something interesting as it goes. All in all this new work I think could have a bright future. Hope the author can keep it up.