WAR_END

Right... My MC is simp 🤣

8/31/23 My first review on the first chapter of my first novel... I'm still a newbie and inexperience author. Who trying to explore what is the author life looks like... I don't know where this story of mine will lead me but... I will do my best. Of course it is 5 stars! IT is my first ever book after all.

Its not it is useless... In fact his hellish training Help him so much. (I don’t need to explain it... It is in the chapter seriously...) And... I’m just thinking of logical point. If he fight the demon without a single weapon there is a chance he can defeat it but there is also a chance of him dying. And if you reading this right. His stats and other skill become lower. - Also the demon is stronger than him. That is why he can’t just go and fight it by himself. Like I write in the POV of the MC fighting the demon is a gamble. And he is not going to gamble. Because. He is a coward and a coward is the one who live the longest. Yeah, that’s all of it... I don’t know why I’m explaining this chapter to you. Seriously. Read it more carefully. If you all thinking there is a holes in this chapter point it out. So I can improve my writing a bit.