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I was thinking rising of the shield hero
I was thinking more Rising of the Shield Hero with the seven sins series of weapons
You should probably change the name to Robin so it makes sense instead of Jackš
I donāt know if it is too late to use this but you should definitely give them the powers from the 2018 Rise of the TMNT animation so that you can maybe use them better in fight scenes. I also havenāt seen it get used much!
Now the inner Batman in him will really start to show, you just know heās about to have anything and everything in there ājust incaseāššš
You should also look at the chord cutting style that is used in Baki the Grappler or the whip movements!
Why didnā he just take the shot Hitmonlee too, the guy couldnāt have stopped him lol
Typoā Present Mic
Yeah I read that in the comments before so thatās totally understandable in that context. I just thought that you were using it in a way to move the plot along which Iāve noticed is a pretty common theme in darker fics which is kind of a cop out in my head. Thanks for the response, definitely shows that you care for the story. Keep up the good work though, Iāve really enjoyed reading it so far! šš¾
Iām like actually mad, idk why a death needs to happen in these kinds of stories as some sort of āwake up callā like why? A life and death situation isnāt enough? To have one of his PokĆ©mon critically injured canāt just be enough?
I think they meant Vibrava
Whereās the perk?
When did he get the Sharingan?
So much gaslighting in that statement lol
Dragon Tail*
seemed really*
That whole paragraph was a fever dream to read, please put this stuff through a grammar checker or somethingš
***SPOILER WARNING-One Piece*** Omg but what if the next world he links to is One Piece, if he could save Ace with Asia who should be able to do so easily, then Whitebeard would probably give him his Haki, physical abilities, leading skills, and devil fruit power if he capitalizes on the moment before Whitebeard dies and he can throw in to just to spite Blackbeard. He could possibly try to double dip with Garp as well and any of the other people who end up dying in One Piece as well.