At first the MC only had a book that could tell him about what could happen in the future, and this seemed like a fun idea. But now the book gives him suggestions and sometimes just straight up tells him what to do, then he finds out that his parents were powerful mages who stored all their lifetime of knowledge in a ring which they gave to him (the ring we were not informed that the MC had) and then he just happened to also have a map to the fountain of youth(which we didn't even know existed). All of this is just too random and too convenient which makes for a cheap reading experience. For now I could ignore most of this as the book is still in its introduction phase and this might just be a quick way to set up the story but i really hope that there aren't as many inconsistencies and plot holes once the story begins.

It seems as though the MC doesn't know what to do in his life since he already got almost everything he ever wanted so it would be cool if the system gave the MC an arch nemesis so that the MC may have some sort of challenge in his life. As for who the arch nemesis could be, I want them to be more than just powerful but also someone who is cunning and has access to a lot of resources like Vilgax from Ben 10.

One thing i have noticed in the past few chapters is that the writing quality has gotten a bit too good and not in a good way. The narration does not fit the theme of jujutsu kaisen anymore and the dialogues have gotten a bit too sophisticated and do not match the personalities of the characters. And there is also the fact that all of these characters are starting to sound the same. Sometimes i am unable to keep up with the story because the dialogues have become too complicated for my understanding. All of this along with a couple of other things has made the reading experience considerably worse the past few chapters even though the writing is technically of higher quality.

I'll be honest, I did not enjoy this chapter. I feel like mahito shouldn't have survived as long as he did against the MC.

Shoko

I feel like this dialogue is from OPM.

There are plenty of beings who are much stronger than true form darkseid like the presence, Lucifer Morningstar, elaine balloc, the spectre, superboy prime etc... As for the MC, i think the author stated that the MC is totally unkillable.

This is why I hate Xavier, anything that he can't control he considers to be a risk to humanity.

To be honest this chapter sucked. Davian is looking for a challenge in the bleach universe after becoming one of the strongest beings in the DC universe.This is beyond stupid and just feels like the author just wanted to integrate the bleach universe in this story but didn't know how.

Did you read the previous chapters? It's clearly mentioned there that the sorcerer supreme of this universe is in possession of the soul stone instead of the time stone.

If there is to be more romance in this fic plz let the love interest be Selene. It simply makes the most sense.

The MC is a degenerate and the entire fanfic is just about harem, there is no actual story here.

He could have instead just pulled the homeless man out of the way.

Thanks for that, I will be waiting for the next update.

I have one question, have u already decided on a love interest? I just wish u go for Illyana because I have not found a single fic her as the love interest.

This story is fun to read. The writing quality, story development and world background are beautifully executed and all the characters in this fic are very well written.So overall an amazing fanfic and i highly recommend this to anyone looking for a marvel fanfiction.

Finally caught up to the end and I have to say that was a really fun read. This is one of the best Marvel fanfics I have read and I hope it gets updated soon because I really want more.

Plz don't kill off Laura, Gabbie or Raze, I love all the 3 characters.

This fic has too many negative reviews, I mean at first I get it since in the beginning i myself wasn't the biggest fan of the story but it gets better. The story, power scaling and the MC all improved to the point where I would consider this as one of the best DC fics I have ever read.