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  • Crazy_Lady_2805
    Crazy_Lady_28052yr
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    Spoiler!! This plan will get cancelled in the story.

    "Then let's meet together at the XXX Restaurant by 8 pm this Saturday then"
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  • Crazy_Lady_2805
    Crazy_Lady_28052yr
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    We can use this part to add a misunderstanding, to make their relationship better.

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  • Crazy_Lady_2805
    Crazy_Lady_28052yr
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    Here, I think we can add a few more sibling conversations in the coming plot of the story?? Anybody??

    "That's fine, but you irritate me enough at home already, I don't think I will be able to take that normally at work." Ashley was deadly serious with her lines.
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  • Crazy_Lady_2805
    Crazy_Lady_28052yr
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    Firstly, love to all. Keep loving keep sharing the book so it can grow... pls Genuine Review; Damien and Megan are not written into the typical shadow of business people but are at the very same time shown as humans. The characters are portrayed in a very different form as everyone other than Ashley has a lot, so quite a good story. I got a few spoilers from the author herself, hence I know all of this. BTW she has put effort into my last idea Criticism: The story is a little too fast running here and there and suddenly slows down a lot otherwise. I think that needs work, another point is that there should be side stories since so far we are only able to know the main characters. All the best Author!!

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  • Crazy_Lady_2805
    Crazy_Lady_28052yr
    Replied to 1289_2901

    I removed that comment since I wanted to add another review and my idea was perfectly portrayed here anyways.

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  • Crazy_Lady_2805
    Crazy_Lady_28052yr
    Replied to Crazy_Lady_2805

    Guys I keep reading the more, the greater it turns out, tho not put in right words she definitely has a solid base for a story here

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  • Crazy_Lady_2805
    Crazy_Lady_28052yr
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    Nope it's not the FL...

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