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The dialogue is a bit stiff, but I'm pretty sure you're improving as time goes on

I can't help but want moreeeeee, author take all these stones!

I hope he'd accept them as they are rather than "try" to fix them

So it's Leon from the past (future?) that controlled the body... I don't know what to feel about this, feels kinda homo ngl

That was fast, I was just reading and then an update dropped

let's see the if there really was any progress with homelander

Correct me if I'm wrong, but isn't it the same in the show? He was running at the same speed as a normal human, since he couldnt catch up with the boys whilst chasing them

Love it!

Overall amazing story, based from the 10 chapters available, this is one of the best fanfiction of spiderman EVER. Kudos to you author

I feel like I've read this story before, somewhere else...