Neelii_44
Just trying to write something everyone will enjoy. Otherwise I’m watching anime or Korean dramas…Sometimes I’m reading too.
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Neelii_446 months agoReplied to Francis_JumokeCheck again🥹😱
- Neelii_447 months agoReplied to KKGG
lol exactly
- Neelii_4410 months agoCommented
Good first chapter.
This book has been deleted. - Neelii_4410 months agoCommented
Good chapter, clear outline, and is well thought out.
- Neelii_4410 months agoCommented
That's a good first chapter. Interestingly, this story has so much potential, but it could be a bit more descriptive in certain parts. Probably could use pathetic fallacy to create more of an attachment (just a suggestion), but I like it.
- Neelii_4410 months agoCommented
I like how he isn't overpowered or gaining leveling up too fast.
- Neelii_4410 months agoCommented
I liked the chapter. I especially like the way you implement your system. It is easy to differentiate the system from the overall narrative. It was a good read. Just what I needed after starting Sweet Home Season 2.
- Neelii_4410 months agoCommented
Very interesting so far.
