Kinglong9090

I don't know why every time someone creates a DC fanfic they are all foolish heroes with a hero complex like the one you wrote, most of them must have dreams of becoming heroes or something!

Honestly he looks pathetic, now he's going to become a hero who doesn't kill because he thinks he doesn't have the right, like Batman, if that's the case I'm out!

Honestly, what a useless distribution of statistics!

Honestly, MC is a complete idiot, at first he was looking for the manipulator and now his wife was raped and he doesn't do anything, useless!

simply because it seems that his knights seem so weak!.

honestly how come the uzumaki myth doesn't have the authority to do anything, even in the anime and manga she demonstrated that she had strength and authority over practically everyone while she was alive, and giving her technique to konoha was a bad choice, he could have invented something and saying that only he could use it, thus attributing more value to it, bad choice!

Honestly, I'm going to stop reading here, every fanfic that involves lookism the protagonists say they will be free and think only of themselves, but in the end they are always good and don't do anything bad, next time don't give false hope, goodbye! .

Great bloodline, not too dominated but enough to be strong, I hope he ends up with Ellia!

He has no ambitions and his goal is just to put his sister on the throne, I bet that when he manages to do that this fanfic will end, he's nothing more than a family dog!

very cowardly