Kinglong9090

He seems more like a coward, at the beginning of this story everything was going well, now he has become a joke, mistake after mistake, and he even had his advantage practically taken away from him!

Beta

he looks like a servant

This mc is one of the most pathetic ones I've ever read, disappointing!

NICEEEEEEE

It's incredible how fanfic authors do everything to maintain the plot due to lack of enthusiasm!

ekko hasn't developed the time machine yet, if he does that just to keep the plot going I'll abandon it!

disappointing, a cowardly and unambitious mc, do you want to be a Mexican soap opera writer?, so much drama for nothing and in the end it continues to be the same thing as the series!.

Will he continue to regret having used ideas from other universes to prosper like a complete idiot?, other than that I'm enjoying reading it!

honestly this is getting boring, he just has this weak and small facade, he is very passive, you are trying to copy Aizen, but even Aizen was respected for his strength!.