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Kinglong90903 days agoCommentedyou write a lot to explain a simple thing, and he talks a lot with Raphael
- Kinglong90905 days agoCommented
He seems more like a coward, at the beginning of this story everything was going well, now he has become a joke, mistake after mistake, and he even had his advantage practically taken away from him!
- Kinglong90902 months agoCommented
he looks like a servant
- Kinglong90903 months agoCommented
This mc is one of the most pathetic ones I've ever read, disappointing!
- Kinglong90903 months agoCommented
NICEEEEEEE
- Kinglong90903 months agoCommented
It's incredible how fanfic authors do everything to maintain the plot due to lack of enthusiasm!
- Kinglong90903 months agoCommented
ekko hasn't developed the time machine yet, if he does that just to keep the plot going I'll abandon it!
- Kinglong90903 months agoCommented
disappointing, a cowardly and unambitious mc, do you want to be a Mexican soap opera writer?, so much drama for nothing and in the end it continues to be the same thing as the series!.
