This is my first review, so here we go. I really like the idea of the story, but there are quite a few grammatical mistakes. I advise you to rewrite the chapters because your book has a lot of potential. By the way, the character of Thomas is quite annoying, literally, so I'd really like to see him eliminated or help find a new body for charles to get in upcoming chapters. p.s this review is purely based on the first few chapter

So much for inheriting the knowledge of the Gods; he is too naive, trusts people too readily, despite the fact that he does not know them well, and why in the world is his cultivation speed so slow when he has that spatial kingdom with a wealth of resources left by the God and keeps complaining that he cannot use them because of his low cultivation when his strength ought to be sufficient to use them? Even his guard has a much faster cultivation rate than him.

CRINGE!?!