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This entire chapter was a waste of time with many irrelevant words. Doesn’t give depth to the story but rather makes it painful to read.
“In order to” ……
Why not pink?
If he has a system where he could get all these from then shouldn’t he be asking the system to show cultivation resources currently useful for his level and using hatred points on those ? You’re moving further and further away from the systems purpose and making the MC sound and look stupid for not thinking of these and instead writing novels. I’ll drop this if it continues
Ugh….Mr Author 😑
I ain’t your son 😒
Mr author, it’s not a compliment at least I don’t see it as it one. Character should at least try to stay in line with their experiences or goals. Not become bumbling fools from seeing a “pretty” girl.
And not some “oh I’ll be your master” plot or “oh I’ll chase after this girl by becoming stronger”. If it is then this novel won’t be worth reading past the free chapters as I could easily determine what comes next. But let’s read on and see shall we?.
Hopefully not some “fell in love bs” playing out. The plots all over the place and story looking similar to bloodline system.
You still haven’t edited and made changes to this yet. So it’s still doesn’t make sense 😂
Honestly it’s frustrating
🤣🤣
😂
I just paid to unlock a few chapters. I hope this isn’t the quality to expect for what’ s being paid for else I’d be really disappointed.
Patronise?
First time I’v been forced to drop a review on a novel. Summed up in 3 words. Pile of garbage. The character was all over the place. Levelling system can’t even be considered a system. No explanation on things. World development is awful. I held hope it would get better but nope it got worse and worse with 0 objective or aim. Goes on to say “oh I’ll keep a low profile by not doing this” and next second does the thing he just mentioned not to do. Absolute waste of time.
Seriously solus needs muted. I hope it happens.. it’s becoming annoying
Sometimes solus… sometimes it’ll be great if you could just shut up. 😌
He’d probably be more interested if they could transform into a rock
Violet = purple