Great start for a story. That was an amazing prologue. So much happened in it. I wonder where the next chapter will begin at. It's crazy how this is all going to circle back to them. I can tell there is going to be a lot of events that happen, I can not wait!

Yeah, I agree with that.

This turn of events are extremely unexpected. I did not see the story going in that direction. Nevertheless, I enjoyed it very much and I can see that you put lots of thought and time into it.

The story was very interesting. I enjoyed reading it. I love the ending and the plot twist! The characters have different personalities, which adds to the overall story. I think that way that it was written was interesting as well.